The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

Spyder - The End Is Near

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Spyder - The End Is Near

Postby Spyder » Oct 11th, '11, 01:32

Ill leave your mandible busted when I damage and smother
With the Imagery so vivid kid your Camera Shutters!
And you is nothin ill continue to put G on the shelf
You say the same shit, even your titles repeatin itself!
Bang Bang… ha let me guess your prolly think that’s ill too
But you Lindsay Lohan, your already know Who Killed You.
Its Spyder, ill continue to stretch bars it’s the way that I write
So the only way Geno could emulate is to bite,
This White Boy thinkin pickin up the mic was the right choice
But that’s shit just annoys me, I call him White Noise.
But I guess I gotta give him some cred over every endeavor
Cause his three losses to me helped better my record,
Shit I remember our first verse before he was a cocky shit
Rocked a six, teen haunted this kids dream, dropped him quick.
Then second and third left you boom, swept, gone
Im an Insomniac and still we see Ego being Slept On!
Ya I read your posts, claim to be me, you got no sleep problems
Or maybe its me, I think me bringing this heats got em.
Im bout to dish out, every skeleton in this kids house
Cause I got a ‘tactic’ backwards to stay in this bitch mouth!! (omg)
It wasn’t long ago your named changed in it self,
Must of realized it being Genocide youd prolly mass murder yaself!

But what skeletons are those Spyder do tell ~
Well gee I didn’t wanna hurt his feelings or nothing but ok.


Ill aim a great hook at your ‘Face, Book’ it as your worst day
Oh wait, that was when your chick cheated on your Birthday!
Haha, but don’t take it hard, was she really planned as a wife?
Nah man, she probably just wanted a man in her life…
Theres a reason your rhymin style has been all text
And theres also a reason your last track was called X.
I think you Xd yourself out bro, inflicted with lead shards
Sayin my name and quoting Em were the best parts. (lol)
Im dealin with a dark rapper with such cynicism?
Yet he bitches and moans when Sam gives him some criticism.
Shit is prison right, everybodys pickin on ya huh Geno
I guess these 4 tracks did more than damage your Tough Ego.
I reem this shit, defeat him quick right like Ether spit
Puttin them links in your sig so people actually see your shit.
You asked why I fed your diss, heres to thinkin G
Only reason I peep your shit – is for my link of feed!!
These tracks will lash, crash back and are burnin some
So tell me would you like to respond to that?


viewforum.php?f=24 LOF
ImageImageImage
User avatar
Spyder
Pill Popper
Pill Popper
 
Posts: 9418
Joined: Jan 31st, '09, 01:56
Location: El Dorado
Gender: Male

Re: Spyder - The End Is Near

Postby Mr.DGAF » Oct 11th, '11, 01:48

This beef is giving the cw some good drops recently, I like that. There's no dobut your gifted writing punches Spyder, easily one of the best on the site at that. But I wasn't feeling a couple here. The facebook one actually made me semi-cringe. However, the link of feed line and the tactic line were awesome, I really liked that. Not much else to say, a solid verse, but not your best of the beef.


Oh, and the 'quoting' you and Em line, I liked that one haha.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

Image
Image
Quest for Six
Team Emma Stone
Buns till amazing... :')
User avatar
Mr.DGAF
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2349
Joined: Aug 15th, '11, 04:10
Location: In the back seat of your truck, with duct tape stretched out.
Gender: Male

Re: Spyder - The End Is Near

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 11th, '11, 02:38

Idunno, I thought this shit was sick, especially the facebook line. :worship: btw, to anyone who hasn't feeded yet, could you? viewtopic.php?f=24&t=129972 I need to desperately improve.
Horsebot3K wrote:
Usernamesarehard wrote:My dick is going in your mouth whether you like it or not bipolar fuck boy.

Image
User avatar
JamaicanPattlez
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2656
Joined: Dec 26th, '10, 05:57
Gender: Male

Re: Spyder - The End Is Near

Postby Spyder » Oct 11th, '11, 02:45

thanks guys.

i had the dopest personal but he edited it out :shifty:

and this one was more towards personals than punches so :y:
ImageImageImage
User avatar
Spyder
Pill Popper
Pill Popper
 
Posts: 9418
Joined: Jan 31st, '09, 01:56
Location: El Dorado
Gender: Male

Re: Spyder - The End Is Near

Postby Sam. » Oct 11th, '11, 19:58

For some reason the title reminded me of the Theme music that was used 4 "WWE: Armageddon(2005) " .

By now this beef has become so played out that there is nothing left to say by both of you.Thankfully both of you took it sportingly and nothing went down in other parts of this Forum. :b: to that.

This was a nice Reply tbh.A simple bunch of verses that had a great Flow and Multis. blahahahahaha XD.
You could have said more vicious 'cuz this was the last straw but .. doesn't matter .In fact if Geno would ended this in the way that you did ,i would have said the same for him.
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
Image
Image
User avatar
Sam.
Bad Influence
Bad Influence
 
Posts: 16630
Joined: Jun 7th, '10, 11:10
Location: India
Gender: Male

Re: Spyder - The End Is Near

Postby JamaicanPattlez » Oct 11th, '11, 20:26

I definitely had fun reading the battle you guys had going for a bit, I feel like I can take what you guys did, learn from it, and use it to improve myself. That, and it was entertaining to see a lot of shots taken. :y:
Horsebot3K wrote:
Usernamesarehard wrote:My dick is going in your mouth whether you like it or not bipolar fuck boy.

Image
User avatar
JamaicanPattlez
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2656
Joined: Dec 26th, '10, 05:57
Gender: Male

Re: Spyder - The End Is Near

Postby Atone » Oct 12th, '11, 00:48

Lol, i'm lovin this, i love how suddenly CW just blew up with all the writers goin ape shit

this pice is dope to, some good jabs and it flows nice in alot of parts
Image
User avatar
Atone
Under The Influence
Under The Influence
 
Posts: 4855
Joined: Jun 1st, '10, 08:47
Gender: Male


Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users