I'm sorry Ft. VBV

[J.R.]

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[Intro- VenomBlackViper]
Poor guy wrote a diss track towards people on an internet forum and was shook to even name drop.


[Chorus- Sung]
So I'm sorry..
I didn't want it to end like this.
Afraid to say my name.
On your diss.
Wanna bring up shit?
Nobody gives a fuck about.
Fuck you bitch.
You done fucked around.

[Verse 1]
Yo..
Little bitch, wanna diss me After I apologize,
Gonna fiddle with me? I'll Laugh at all the times,
It was rap you said I could Snap in half and now you wreck my mind,
You think I Need this shit? Do you just not read or are you blind?
Think I wanna Feed you bitch? Acting like elevating is such a crime,
Taking shots at the bottom portion of the skill ladder, watch the time,
Casue in a couple of weeks, will this beef, still matter? Tryna craft a line,
Trying to come up with a beast and savage find, Enough to end your rhymes,
Don't worry though, Your wack so Ima send you mine!
Ever since my seizure, I been half near blind,
How'd I miss the deception, All the chimes,
all the signals, All the signs and messages,
So here, I got some very fine Presages,
It says your end is near, You better learn not to disrespect,
I've sent the queer home in a battle, Leave you with a pissed affect,
My dick? Hell yeah the shits erect! Jizzing on your torso,
Pissing on your corpse bro, I ain't go no remorse hoe.
Now You fucked up Lyrical trinity, You're hurting Gametheory,
You're a Vincible enemy, The rhymes here leaves your Brain weary
You think you're clever? Finally writing a diss track while I'm banned?
You must either be pissed or mad, I figured I'd write back when I can




[Chorus- Sung]
So I'm sorry..
I didn't want it to end like this.
Afraid to say my name.
On your diss.
Wanna bring up shit?
Nobody gives a fuck about.
Fuck you bitch.
You done fucked around.

[Sam.]

This is some raw ass shit dude.Really looks like you wrote this in a furry because the Structure was way off ..well fuck that does it matter.I liked the flow on this.I could Imagine this as an Audio Battle tbh because the last bars had some sick flow that would sound good on the Mic.Anyway shot's fired at Geno.

Waits for Geno's reply.

PS: I added your work in the thread I was talking about.

[J.R.]

This is some raw ass shit dude.Really looks like you wrote this in a furry because the Structure was way off ..well fuck that does it matter.I liked the flow on this.I could Imagine this as an Audio Battle tbh because the last bars had some sick flow that would sound good on the Mic.Anyway shot's fired at Geno.

Waits for Geno's reply.

PS: I added your work in the thread I was talking about.

Yeah I did write this quick. Why waste my time on him? Just get it over with and put it out ya know. Thanks man.


Also, thanks, sorry I was a dick about adding it first. lol.

[JamaicanPattlez]

This is some raw ass shit dude.Really looks like you wrote this in a furry because the Structure was way off ..well fuck that does it matter.I liked the flow on this.I could Imagine this as an Audio Battle tbh because the last bars had some sick flow that would sound good on the Mic.Anyway shot's fired at Geno.

Waits for Geno's reply.

PS: I added your work in the thread I was talking about.

This. Also...


Now You fucked up Lyrical trinity, You're hurting Gametheory,
You're a Vincible enemy, The rhymes here leaves your Brain weary

I liked that line. Keep it up! Can't wait to see Geno's reaction.

[J.R.]

He said it himself. He's the bottom rung on the skill ladder.

I ain't respond to people who can't battle back.

And it's funny 'cause the VBV quote he used was him saying "too shook to even name drop" and then he didn't even say "Geno" in his verse.

I didn't have to, it's clear who the pussy I'm taking shots at is.

And besides, You started the whole beef/ battle shit, you have to name drop to get anywhere. Everyone knows who this is.

[J.R.]

LOL @ me having to name drop to get anywhere.

Man...

You're only noticed on here because I told you how to execute rhyme schemes, flow, and good structure when writing.

And don't be acting like "everyone knows, it's clear". If you got a problem, say my name then. Don't be duckin' around it.

Oh and by the way, the ONLY thing I've ever said about you in my writing is "I'll rip up every inch of your brick nutz, you dick suck" and you said it was your favourite verse of the song.

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You called me GOAT for a verse that dissed you.

I don't even need to respond LOL

Eh I'm not surprised. I only read your forced multies so I can get to sleep easier. Your raps are boring, have no story telling, and are just complex rhyme schemes unless your on someone else's song. If its yours, it's one of 3 things.

1) A terrible attempt at storytelling
2) Forced multies with awkward flow
3) A collab you get killed on in every department but rhyming and structure.

Forced multis aren't everything. And no, I knew how to do flow and structure before I even met you. I only needed help on rhymes.

For example,

Who the fuck needs multi's when you can achieve a flawless flow ? Flow > Multi's.
And you did have some great multis too, the piece is surprisingly well-written :

Yo, They say lyrical genius is missing in modern day rap
I disagree, My rhymes are hotter than a sun-burnt snatch!

Flow was awesome, internal > end multi's cause they improve the flow more than anything could

The flow overall was near-perfect, man. I enjoyed reading this, and I loved the placing last/racing fast rhyme. Liked the bridge but didn't like the hook but that doesn't matter cause it's a rap track lol. Second verse looked a bit like poet-rap which went better with its content imo. And I really like when people make their own flows and rhyme scheme cause the way you structured your verse and achieved this flow was creative .. This is definitely one of the best pieces i've seen by a new member.

Awesome piece overall, and i'll be waiting for your new album. ( )

So go back to "loling at your epic diss tracks".




And another thing that's kinda off topic. I had 2 points. and Got 2 more for something...It's one point per offense, if I'm not mistaken?
Just an issue that bothers me, considering 4 is a week ban, not 3.

[J.R.]

Sigh.. you're so bipolar.

Good call, I actually am.

[BigBoss]

you guys went off topic, geno give yourself a point tbh

[Blu]

Man, if you guys are gonna battle, take this shit to the shelter!

[Solace]

I know I'm not apart of this and all, and I don't even know what hardcoarzzzz beef is going on da text interwebzy but LOL@ B. Nutz if you think you're any better than Geno and have the audacity to insult his writtens.

Really looks like you wrote this in a furry because the Structure was way off ..well fuck that does it matter.

I could imagine this little kid foaming at the mouth because of text beef.

[BigBoss]

I know I'm not apart of this and all, and I don't even know what hardcoarzzzz beef is going on da text interwebzy but LOL@ B. Nutz if you think you're any better than Geno and have the audacity to insult his writtens.

Really looks like you wrote this in a furry because the Structure was way off ..well fuck that does it matter.

I could imagine this little kid foaming at the mouth because of text beef.

im reminded of Royce's little Twitter beefs

It's not even a text beef though.

He's mad 'cause I banned him for a week.

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[JamaicanPattlez]

Tbh I think this all is confusing, didn't this start out with Mahmoud dissing B, MC went hardcore at Mahmoud and both MC and Mahmoud got a temp-ban?

[BigBoss]

Tbh I think this all is confusing, didn't this start out with Mahmoud dissing B, MC went hardcore at Mahmoud and both MC and Mahmoud got a temp-ban?

[JamaicanPattlez]

Tbh I think this all is confusing, didn't this start out with Mahmoud dissing B, MC went hardcore at Mahmoud and both MC and Mahmoud got a temp-ban?

If I'm wrong, my bad and feel free to correct me. But both got banned and then B was too for some reason?

[BigBoss]

Tbh I think this all is confusing, didn't this start out with Mahmoud dissing B, MC went hardcore at Mahmoud and both MC and Mahmoud got a temp-ban?

If I'm wrong, my bad and feel free to correct me. But both got banned and then B was too for some reason?

no i laughed because you said he went hardcore lol
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this:

I know I'm not apart of this and all, and I don't even know what hardcoarzzzz beef is going on da text interwebzy