Random Punches

[Mr.DGAF]

This started out totally random, then it turned into me trying some word play/punches. It's completely random, though I tried to at least string it together somewhat mildly coherently. But, I focused mostly on punches and wordplay here to better myself all around, so structure, rhymes and flow were tossed out the window. Also explains why this is so short.


My rhymes leave you worse than treatment from chemo might, yes I can sir
My lines are bleak and deceitful, lie to your face and shake your hand first
Please don't believe that I don't hate ya, you can see if you make me rattled
I will drop you up in Jamaica, leave you in shits creek without some Pattlez
Or without a saddle, thowing shaky punches like Mohammad Ali would do
You dodging blow(s) like closet gays on their first date with a girl could too
And my word is still true, you lames are stuck playing the same freaking game
Called to Duty to learn the Gears of War, yet you fear the world, geeks complain
And this this is so insane, I can rap this backwards riding inside my RACECAR
Get this MADAM some help, you ain't on my LEVEL, certainly not on my RADAR


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[RainMan44]

This started out totally random, then it turned into me trying some word play/punches. It's completely random, though I tried to at least string it together somewhat mildly coherently. But, I focused mostly on punches and wordplay here to better myself all around, so structure, rhymes and flow were tossed out the window. Also explains why this is so short.


My rhymes leave you worse than treatment from chemo might, yes I can sir
My lines are bleak and deceitful, lie to your face and shake your hand first
Please don't believe that I don't hate ya, you can see if you make me rattled
I will drop you up in Jamaica, leave you in shits creek without some Pattlez
Or without a saddle, thowing shaky punches like Mohammad Ali would do
You dodging blow(s) like closet gays on their first date with a girl could too
And my word is still true, you lames are stuck playing the same freaking game
Called to Duty to learn the Gears of War, yet you fear the world, geeks complain
And this this is so insane, I can rap this backwards riding inside my RACECAR
Get this MADAM some help, you ain't on my LEVEL, certainly not on my RADAR


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"And this this is so insane, I can rap this backwards riding inside my RACECAR
Get this MADAM some help, you ain't on my LEVEL, certainly not on my RADAR"


I see what you did there.


That was my favorite part, overall some good shit you got here. Good way to work on punches/wordplay, and it seems that's what you tried to do here.

Good for what it is, punches put together.