The Cypher Freestyle

[Atone]

this is from my twitter account i did a lil cypher

In a cypher i kick fire on you piss stained
shit for brain's make em say THIS KIDS INSANE
and i aint playin games bitch don't make me say your name
cuz i'll make you go home and slit your wrist
cuz i say this shit just to get you pissed
so sit on my dick and spin you think i give a fuck
damn i can't even give a shit enough
to whipe my ass with
now tell me this verse aint a classic
i smashed it/ came back with that shit to call you wack kid-
get back bitch i'm packin action to give you mother fuckers satisfaction
stab these has beens and if i take a shot at a rapper it may happen to be
a faggot emcee who couldn't even rap around a tree
look at me the way i spit these and rhyme so kindly
now go ask ya favorite rapper why the fuck he hasn't signed me

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[Sam.]

I liked the continuation type of thing that you did,was good but the that makes it a little ehhhh to flow with. I mean the structure get's messed when you try to Record this ,well that depends on what you do with this.

i smashed it/ came back with that shit to call you wack kid-
get back bitch i'm packin action to give you mother fuckers satisfaction

Liked this ^ part.

Sick Sreestyle .

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[Atone]

i ended up recording it and put it on my youtube channel,

[Sam.]

i ended up recording it and put it on my youtube channel,

lol ,I seriously couldn't think of that.Doing this would put you off-beat a couple of times.Whatever it is brah ,if you could do it then it's your Ability then & that I'm not doubting at all.

[Atone]

lol, it was hard as fuck to record and i am a lil off beat, i'm actually thinkin about takin it off youtube cuz it didn't turn out the way i wanted it to

[Sam.]

lol, it was hard as fuck to record and i am a lil off beat, i'm actually thinkin about takin it off youtube cuz it didn't turn out the way i wanted it to

Told you.

[mdemaz]

Flowed really well bro, I'm impressed with how well your lyrics have improved.