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Feels Like [Track 2, Freestyle]

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Feels Like [Track 2, Freestyle]

Postby J.R. » Oct 12th, '11, 20:34

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Why do I still try? Feels like,
everyone's thinking "Why does he still write?"
He's sinking back into real life,
One day, he'll get a deal right?
And then all this work will pay off,
For the days lost, all the pain brought,
Is it a dream, he could achieve?
You'll never know, if you never believe,
Now he's gotta look for a plan to conceive,
All he can think about is the man he could be,
Looking for a deal, to feel accomplished,
All he can hear, is the beat just stomping,
His life flashed, like he died,
But tonight is the first time, he feels alive,
He tries to be real and kind,
But he's still blind, Haters I'd like to say goodbye.
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Re: Feels Like [Track 2, Freestyle]

Postby Sam. » Oct 12th, '11, 20:45

Nice 8 Mile-ish start :shifty: .The content was pretty simple and it seemed extremely short.
Some Multis didn't work like this one.

And then all this work will pay off,
For the days lost, all the pain brought,
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
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Re: Feels Like [Track 2, Freestyle]

Postby J.R. » Oct 14th, '11, 20:05

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