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[Track 4] Eyeball

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[Track 4] Eyeball

Postby J.R. » Oct 16th, '11, 21:27

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[Intro]
One knife, two knife, three knife, four knife,
I throw one right into your windpipe,
five knife, six knife, seven knife, eight knife,
This is where the hate dies, This is where your fate lies,
nine knife, ten knife, Eleven knife, twelve knife,
This is where your head is shelved, right?
Thirteen knife, fourteen knife, fifteen knife, sixteen knife,
On the floor is where your head lies..


[Verse 1]
Baby, pass me the Eyeball, Your predicted death, isn't My fault,
I said I'd have Guys fall, Should've trusted, I'd make your Lives halt,
I don't believe in peace, I believe in knives, guns and bombs,
I'll make your hearing cease, Eating your ear drums, Asking you to Calm
My property has a No tresspassing sign, just to entice you to trespass,
I been stalkin' thee, Can you be mine? Or should I dice you up? Let's ask,
The mirror on the wall, Stare into it deep, ask it who's the scariest of em all,
Take you downstairs, head and feet, on my wall, What, are you Scared of my hall?
Reach the stairs, like I care if you fall, Maybe I should share you with ma,
Maybe , I should call the police, and ask em to send someone tall,
Kill him, glue you guys together, By the eyeball's,
Fill him, with stuffing, While screaming, "Die law!"
Or maybe, I'll wait till 11:11 and make a wish,
Pull the severed head of Stephen, and give it a kiss,
Pull out his neck bone, show it to you and make you put it your pocket,
Pull out the phone while I grab my glock, tape it to your head while i cock it,
And sock a knife right into your stomach, let it slowly bleed,
And I'll watch your will power plummet, On the blood My hoes can feed,
You should know that I committ these evil deeds,
Fuck the hoes, and let em grow my corrupted seeds,
Let them slowly show the babies to me,
Infect the weak with rabies, On aids it can feed.


[Chorus]
So look into my eyeball, before I rip yours out,
Acting like it's my fault, it got torn out,
I just eat them , I don't take them,
Just like women, I only rape them,
Unless I tape them, to those of another,
so get ready to actually stare, into your grandmother.
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Re: [Track 4] Eyeball

Postby Jdubem » Oct 17th, '11, 00:02

Thats pretty fucked up. Thats all I can really say. That and your intro reminds me of the song One Shot Two Shot
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Re: [Track 4] Eyeball

Postby SG. » Oct 17th, '11, 11:51

Yeah, I was thinking the intro reminded me of One Shot Two Shot. I'm in school now so I'll give full feed later.
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Re: [Track 4] Eyeball

Postby J.R. » Oct 17th, '11, 20:01

Zabe wrote:Yeah, I was thinking the intro reminded me of One Shot Two Shot. I'm in school now so I'll give full feed later.

K, Bump.
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Re: [Track 4] Eyeball

Postby J.R. » Oct 18th, '11, 20:08

bump.
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Re: [Track 4] Eyeball

Postby SG. » Oct 18th, '11, 20:59

Alright, full feed. The song was kinda weak in terms of rhyming. However, the content was great. I found the mention of Stephen weird as my name actually is Stephen. :laughing:

Just improve your multis. :y:
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Re: [Track 4] Eyeball

Postby Mr.DGAF » Oct 19th, '11, 21:51

I like this. I like that you kept the eyeball in their pretty much the entire time, sticking to the theme. Lots of times when I read some horror core stuff, the typical direction is just for murdering or stalking type stuff. So that you went with that theme and stuck with it the whole time is cool.

The rhyming is pretty good, I especially liked the multies in the first couple of bars. The flow is a bit difficult, for me, through some patches. But most all of it flowed really well.

I like the drop homie, and it's definitely refreshing to see you step out of your comfort zone.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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