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Summarise [TRACK 2]

Postby SG. » Oct 22nd, '11, 20:34

[Intro]

Welcome to my life
Too long?
You start taking notes
I'll be summarising

[Verse]

Turns out that the meaning of life is to find a meaning
Too bad you're blind to the signs that I'm seeing
Too bad you're can't breathe the air I'm breathing
Why can't you stop seething and start believing?
Alright, start listening cause here's my life so far
I always bail out and fail even though I fight so hard
Every other rapper wants girls, money and power
I'm hoping I don't meet the serpent under the flower
"Imma let you finish, but I'm the best of all time!"
Fuck no, you and what army? Let me call mine
Might as well be schizophrenic, because I've got slim shades
Of craziness in my brain, I'm brawling, bring blades
Fostered, my daddy's dead, that's my whole life!
I'm only 15, what'd you expect, a hoe of a wife?
I shine a torch in my eyes and interrogate myself
I've sat for a long time, hoping my mates might help
Fuck them, they're too busy hating each other for no reason
Their hearts are as cold as an abnormal autumn season
I'm lecturing for a reason, so you can get some context
So you don't think my songs are just made-up and far-fetched
So right before you examine the lights in my eyes
Give me a brief moment so I might summarise

[Chorus]

If I could summarise my life for you,
I'd fail cause my memory just goes back to 2002
Before you start judging me, take a step in my shoes
And I realise that no matter what I do, I'm better than you

[Outro]

So forget me when I'm gone but never move on
I'll be missing from your life, forever in song

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Re: Summarise [TRACK 2]

Postby Sam. » Oct 22nd, '11, 20:39

By far this is your 2nd best piece till now.Flawless and fuck criticism like a hoe.
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Re: Summarise [TRACK 2]

Postby Atone » Oct 22nd, '11, 21:29

good story telling type thing, multi's and everything in this.

as sam said, this is one of your best i'v seen,

"Imma let you finish, but I'm the best of all time!"
Fuck no, you and what army? Let me call mine

that made me laugh
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Re: Summarise [TRACK 2]

Postby Man1x » Oct 22nd, '11, 23:59

Zabe's got that longevity

Edit: Bro, great multis, flow, EVERYTHING. You've really came a far way. Nothing I can really criticize. Funny as fuck too, I think you've long out passed my writing abilities. :y:
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Re: Summarise [TRACK 2]

Postby SG. » Nov 9th, '11, 00:45

I'm not putting up any more tracks until I get more feed on this.
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