[Track 7- Man In Plastic Freestyle]

[J.R.]

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[Verse]
Buried deep in the shallow hole of your grave,
I slowly swallow my tea, and I continue to shake,
The coffin of which you have, made out of plastic,
It seems to have become stretchable like elastic,
Everyone's all shaking and static..
I see your heart...Reach in and grab it,
After I've snatched it, I then offend the dramatic,
Because...I FUCKING SNAP IT!
This is for all the times you pushed my strings,
You tugged and worst of all, You crushed my dreams,
And now, oh yes, your a slushee now,
Time to drink your bowels.
And now that I'm done, I Sentence you back to the Ground,
Safe to say when I do this, Graveyard Attendance goes down
I have NO Remorse for this corpse,
My Vicious ways brings Whores to the floor,
Paint your face with the words "Creative control,"
I'm so hurt you could nickname me, Relatable woes,
I come closer, Take a pumpkin and your head, Both I carve,
Call me joker or something, Wanna know how I got these scars?
No chorus for the man in plastic, he doesn't deserve it,
Mix up his eyes with his teeth, Mmmh, Perfect.

[J.R.]

bump

[Atone]

Holy shit this has to be for halloween lol, shit is nice tho,

Time to drink your bowels

kind of gross but i love it

[J.R.]

bump for Halloween.

[Sam.]

Some how I didn't feel the Rhyming and the content of the 1st 8 lines.The rest of the verse was witty and well put.I really liked the Imaginary of the rest of the verse.Keep slayin 'em <--------------my new catch phrase.

[J.R.]

Swallow / Shallow do work

And Crushed and pushed weren't meant to rhyme , overall that just helped the length of the line..



and I don't really use 1/2 rhymes anymore, Go check out the CC track. It's not 1/2, this is about a week or so old and was written straight off the top of my head

[Sam.]

If seen this way they Rhyme.

sh.allow/swuh.allow