Seems like you took the criticism well my
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Like Menzo said, even I read it twice to catch the flow and Rhymes and shit, lol.At 1st I thought what the hell is this? Seriously, but when I did catch the whole thing it was nice as Boobs. If I’m not wrong there was a Tech N9ne reference at that start, dope-ish.
I try my best to rhyme in text 'cause I'm not yet that audible
That’s actually clever of you to put some real personal thoughts in it instead of the usual bragging that is common. I’m not implying that you always brag in your verse but that’s a general criticism that I’m making. Although you did boast about yourself here but I won’t call that bragging because both represent different things.