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[Man1x]

It seems to be popular I got to rape a teenage heart throb (AHHHHHH)
Bieber's new problem, "Oh, Baby!," the cops will be greeted with sobs (He...he...he...hel...help me)
Feed him the cock, "SUCK IT!," and that kids is why you'll see me on COPS (Bad boys whatcha gon' do...)
"Seize him, hey, STOP!""What seems to be the problem?" My freedom's now gone
"Police don't come harm me, in both my palms I'm have three fucking bombs!!!"
"Release the bombs, drop your arms in your palms without harm, we will shoot, Rob!!!!"
"Geez, your wrong if you think I'm giving in, this is what I believe in
"Time to leave in peace son, come on lay down the gun -" I just freeze in
Time and click the trigger, " BOOOOOOOM" the ground flips like Tigger

Just a little story off the top my head in the late of night, I know it really isn't good in any regards but I wasn't trying to be lyrical or any shit like that.

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[Words]

The concept was good, couldn't seem to get the flow down. Since you said you weren't trying to be real lyrical I won't be real nit-picky with that. It wasn't great, but it wasn't bad for something you just put together. It was alright

[Mr.DGAF]

Yeah, it's good for just rhyming and stuff. I mean, it's not super impressive, but yeah, you said yourself it wouldn't be, so yeah. But, the rhyming is good, though at the end it fell kind of. I liked pretty much all of it until the last two lines-ish, because you ended that "teenage heart throb" rhyme scheme.

But yeah, it was decent.

[Sam.]

WTF is this ? Just random thought put together.

[Man1x]

WTF is this ? Just random thought put together.

I wanted to reference Justin Bieber and the Yeater thing. I wouldn't have put that in any of my serious stuff that I really take time to do good so I just made a short, random thought last night.

[RainMan44]

Some funny lines in this, I enjoyed reading it lol


You also got some good rhymes in there, good little piece man


Feed mine?


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