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Spyder - Never Gonna Change

Postby Spyder » Nov 9th, '11, 21:10

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=132971 LOF

another of A New Breed of Beast

They don’t like my tone, they said they had enough
Tell me to watch my mouth, I say shut ya asses up.
Ever sense they named me I came to be,
This monster and aint nothin gone… change me


A, vicodin bitin rhymin Viking apostle
One strike of the mic ill wipe out your entire arsenal.
I am hostel just laughin cause these Gs be whack
Eat a corset before sex as an aphrodisiac,
Sickest youll see me at, compete lets see your text fly
Have this bitch Crew Fucked Fast, call it Sex Drive!
Others lack the skills I was born with all along,
Multies inner, complex vocab when I drop a song.
Im slayin this shit sayin you Quick, but often wrong
You got a bad double time, only way you Fast is Ramadon!!
I call the shots, lyrical magician unlike Copperfield
I know your limitations you an imitation, not as real…
Flow is art if you boastin smarts im bout to drop a feel,
So you know I Kick Knowledge like Socrates on Soccer Fields!
Big Bad Wolf… im built like a Brick Shit House, so shut mouth,
Cause if you try to blow me down, you gon’ pass the fuck out.
-check it-

They don’t like my tone, they said they had enough
Tell me to watch my mouth, I say shut ya asses up.
Ever sense they named me I came to be,
This monster and aint nothin gone… change me


Homie aint heated he bring a Cold War, Do-svidaniya
If these rappers GOATs, I must be El Chupacabra!
Suckin the life out these so called kings
Leavin Balls Tethered til shit broke, now no Ball Swings!
Im prone to stress but still own the vets, mistaken chauvinist
Cause when I RIP ill fuckin leave your headstone just split,
My text known boy, and my pen explode your desk
Ill leave you like Swayze so even your Ghost is Dead!!
What you Said a Stretch, Reach for Shit and syllable flow
Til your Hand Up more Ass than a Ventriloquist Show!
Im Makin you Talk, you fail at Bars when you Take Shots,
I just count the Dough as I pass by, im on my Cake Walk.
And they not, even a contender they just try and fall
Couldn’t pass with they Virus if I removed my FireWall,
Never one to get backed up, break through when I strike a jot
Stack my thoughts, so Jenga’s how I end my writers block!

They don’t like my tone, they said they had enough
Tell me to watch my mouth, I say shut ya asses up.
Ever sense they named me I came to be,
This monster and aint nothin gone… change me


I know im saying New, but as a Beast im the last Breed
Cause as far as opponents go, no competition if you ask me,
Similar to Osama, droppin Bombs to make the tracks grieve
But I aint out to destroy the Big Apple, im just a Bad Seed…
Yep that’s me, ill-tempered cunning linguist
Double my skilled mouth to perform, cunninglingus
Stunning to think it but theres so many who try gettin at me
I just don’t understand what their vision could be,
One rap bout make you tap out like a submission ya see
I leave you Tongue-Tied, cause you Knot spittin with me!
Shit on his piece, dissin me then says he hung my ass?
We getting personal, I was playin light but has it come to that?
This is still a Game cause you aint worth a verse from my track
You Angry Birds couldn’t even knock down what I flung you at!
Aint no comin back and there aint no changin me
Cause it may be crazy but baby this is what I aim to be.

They don’t like my tone, they said they had enough
Tell me to watch my mouth, I say shut ya asses up.
Ever sense they named me I came to be,
This monster and aint nothin gone… change me haha.
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Re: Spyder - Never Gonna Change

Postby Sam. » Nov 9th, '11, 22:54

:worship: :worship: :worship:

This is absolute fire to be honest. Your Punchline game is crazy man, reading your verse carefully helped me in making out how you make your Punhline's :shifty: . The 1st Verse was a little weak as compared to the 2nd and 3rd Verse, which were absolute fire. It's really hard to pin point any particular Punchline that I liked to be very frank.

I really liked how you do your home work well, you did a nice selection of words that you're gonna say and how you're gonna make a Punchline out of them.

I've no criticism at all bro, this is dope as fuck.Can't wait to see the rest of the EP and the people's reaction when they see our collab. :smoking:

Keep slayin 'em. :y:
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Re: Spyder - Never Gonna Change

Postby Spyder » Nov 10th, '11, 02:37

thanks for the good feed bro :worship:
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Re: Spyder - Never Gonna Change

Postby autotooner » Nov 10th, '11, 03:57

I agree, this is straight fire, I laughed my ass off at this line:

If these rappers GOATs, I must be El Chupacabra!
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Re: Spyder - Never Gonna Change

Postby Spyder » Nov 10th, '11, 04:20

thanks bro :smoking:
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Re: Spyder - Never Gonna Change

Postby Sam. » Nov 10th, '11, 19:39

Did my feed make any sense? or am I just saying shit? I'm a little confused. :confusion:
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Re: Spyder - Never Gonna Change

Postby Spyder » Nov 10th, '11, 19:51

made perfect sense bro.

and ya thats basically what i do, in good punches i work in the diction think alot about how i can fraise them to make em harder and concentrate on the set up. one it makes it seem not like a random punch, but a nice set up makes it harder IMO

thanks for noticing :y:
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Re: Spyder - Never Gonna Change

Postby Sam. » Nov 10th, '11, 20:17

Thanks bro.Just asked because lately the things that I'm getting is :confusion: me.
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Re: Spyder - Never Gonna Change

Postby Spyder » Nov 12th, '11, 02:20

bump cause new track tomorrow so tryin to get any feed.

which track should i release?
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