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Postby Words » Nov 10th, '11, 16:59

Just something I wrote quick during class. I may or may not do anything more with this.
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WorDs- Covered

If you’re undiscovered- Are you then just covered?
You reveal what ‘s under, mystery sundering-
When you uncover, you’re making discovered.
The I guess I’m covered hovering on fringes of discovery
When I get air from out of my lungs, it’s a beauty scene
Finally knowing that, finally some people knowing me.
I’ve studied this art, like ridges studied by dactyloscopy.
Listen and hear me, as I flow so beautifully.
Like babbling brooks, corrupted by a babbling crook,
Who cooks wicked rhymes nearly all the time.
As he watches nay- sayers turn into I’m-passing-by’s
I have an impossible uncanny flow,
My sharp tongue is ripping through multi-syllables.
It’s so simple yet complex that,
Success rests on the mind of the people.
Who don’t respect rap or MC’s none either.
It sure is sad when the mood is glad
But I’m in the back- cause people are evil.
You all are whack- remember this track,
When, I come back and claim I am equal.
There’s no sequel, if we don’t write our prequels.
So grab your pen and paper, and get started.
If you don’t now or later, you’ll be heavy hearted.
I’m covered.
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Re: Covered

Postby Sam. » Nov 10th, '11, 20:26

Oh God! What's with the repetitions of the words so many times? That prevented me from enjoying this semi dope verse.
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Re: Covered

Postby Words » Nov 10th, '11, 22:48

Sam. wrote:Oh God! What's with the repetitions of the words so many times? That prevented me from enjoying this semi dope verse.


Like I said, just something quick I did during class. It's a throw away verse
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