I was bored....

[Words]

Just something I did to waste my time while I was bored at work. enjoy
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I'm really untouchable- make that untangable.
With a wicked flow- Wicked so my sickened shows
Hadn't heard WorDs? Than I guess you didn't know.
My verses hold power- To blow down 20 bungalos
and kill off all the buufalos.
Woops! PETA'd probably have a problem with that
They can take it, lube it with their back fat sweat-
and shove that problem, directly up thier A-S-S.
As a matter a fact, while their at it.
They can give me every fake blood gallon, I'll piss in that
And just before they tell me to scat,
I'll have Ozzie O. bite the head off another bat. HA!
This shit's ridiculous I ain't even finished at all!
This Ballroom Blitz I started hasn't turned into a brawl.
Could I count on making you angry, if I called your balls small?
Wait- small? Your shit's nonexistant- like a fucking Ken doll.
Right, wait let me rewrite, and try to make things right.
.....Nah! I'm just kidding! Why would I do that?
I love laughing spastic after a spew some facts.
I also love that feeling......your girlfriends ass!
This isn't even a task, you're easy to attack and harass.
<- No sense of Humor
Sense of Humor->

[Sam.]

I mighty impressed with work bro .I don't have anything in my mind that could say what was wrong with this. The Flow and Rhyming is very good, that's the least I can say.


Keep slayin 'em.

[Innovation]

Decent drop. I felt that the rhyming was a bit inconsistent and often forced. For example: black fat sweat/A-S-S; I'm assuming you went for that rhyme and it seemed a bit forced to me.

It's a decent drop like I said, keep it up man!