Geno - One Mic & A Dream

[JamaicanPattlez]

This was great. Lyricism was great as always, the beat was perfectly suited and I love the content, especially the Eazy line.

[Sam.]

Wonderful.

This is one solid drop from you man, I read it twice for the fuck of dope-ness that this piece had. I must say the way you stuffed the Multis in both the Verses and maintaining the message that you were trying to convey through this was worth the read. The fast flow style that goes well with the beat made me really enjoy this even more. Good job.

Keep slayin 'em - Eminem

[ChristinaE12]

I'll feed this tomorrow.

I read it but would like to properly go through it again first.

[mdemaz]

Mmm..I found myself stretching words to flow properly..

Other then that, it was really good to read along to with the beat.

It depends with how YOU want to approach the beat though.
I know there is other ways.

[Spyder]

to me the punches were very weak, just being honest

"like semen in penis, they peace when i bet them... i mean cmon bra

the two syllable mutlis throughout the first few bars through me off too man.

deff not your best piece

[Spyder]

No re-spect for re-jects who seem fresh, wear v-necks,
And cease when I speak 'cause it's easy for me, man,
Like semin in penis - they peace when I beat them!

bold = multies
italicized = inners

no way is that full bar rhymes

[RainMan44]

Hmm. This was interesting. This is definitely different from other pieces I've read from you. Switched it up a bit here, that's a plus.

I really thought, rhyming wise, this shit was on point. You've pretty much got that part down. And the flow, well, it came off naturally. That shows it's very well structured. Also, it gives me an impression that this was meant to be delivered in a "tough/hard hitting" kind of delivery. That's just what I got from reading it. It'd be interesting to see how you deliver it, can't wait to hear your recorded material if/when you plan on recording in the future.

My favorite thing about this piece had to be the repeated sounds throughout the verse(s). It was stuffed with 'em.

Overall, this was an all around solid drop. Flow and rhyme, and just the attitude I envisioned this being delivered in was dope.

Keep at it brah


P.S, I wrote a verse to this beat as well, so it was interesting to see how two people come up with a different product on the same beat. I will post mine soon.

[mdemaz]

Mmm..I found myself stretching words to flow properly..

Other then that, it was really good to read along to with the beat.

It depends with how YOU want to approach the beat though.
I know there is other ways.

Which words?

Now feelin' so queasy, feedin' a fetus,
It's Eazy to see, like Tomica on beaches.

Well, at least I never did that.
Maybe it would sound different if it was slow, slow, fast, fast, slow, slow and etc...

[Spyder]

I pause at the commas if it helps lol

yes a comma means pause...

[Spyder]

yes

its basic english grammar that a comma means pause

[mdemaz]

Slight pause..

[Sam.]

I pause at the commas if it helps lol

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