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Hard White (Up in the Club) [Remix] - Manix & Zabe

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Hard White (Up in the Club) [Remix] - Manix & Zabe

Postby Man1x » Jan 22nd, '12, 06:35

Manix - http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=142474
Zabe - http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=142474&p=1841394#p1841394


*Yes, I know my structure is off at the beginning. It goes 8 syllables to 12-13 syllables, it's supposed to start slow. Also, thanks to Zabe for the verse and sorry for the long wait for a half assed verse. :sweating:

[Intro]

Haahahahha, I'm the bitch known for intros and what not....Ya miss me?....

GUESS WHO'S BACK BITACHSSSSSSS
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!

[Manix - Verse]

I'm breaking back into the scene
Simple as crashin' through the screen
Trying the charts, but Adele's ass is blocking the path
Strikes in my heart been repelled, has this flop been my last?
Blessed by rap, Zabe keyed my release from my reprieve
Please believe we free, watch we geeks shove by these freaks
Now ending my one and only plea, guns held to peace
Now engrave this covered sea in the blood of the sheep

[Zabe - Verse]

Underage drinking, allow me to promote it
What is Manx thinking? Endow me with the flow shit
Watch out for the rum job, thanks Daemon and Greg
Praise be to the Duff God, Hank's saving a keg
You ever been in a club, one of the Ballyhegan drunks?
I haven't, and I'm proud I'm done with having raves, fuck!
Get on my level, Avicii, before I fuck your shit up on MTV
I ain't dancing to heavy beats, I don't wanna lose my creativity
So let loose Tha Hydrox, they'll fuck you up with five cocks
A million-pound drop of your balls, you fuckin sly fox
So scream "no taxation" while downing your own 100 proof
Fuck the sins we're facing, I'm drowning in so much buns and boobs
Hand me a Guinness, that's stereotypical
I'll transmit to Divis, "why the fuck you so cynical?"
Chop up the hard white, I need to scratch and sniff
One thing before I go, make sure my brandy's stiff
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Re: Hard White (Up in the Club) [Remix] - Manix & Zabe

Postby Man1x » Jan 22nd, '12, 22:35

Zabe, Amazing fucking verse. You didn't go all out on rhyming but this was a club track so it wasn't expected. Damn, you blew me out tha water, good looks ma wigger.
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Re: Hard White (Up in the Club) [Remix] - Manix & Zabe

Postby Man1x » Jan 22nd, '12, 22:36

Man1x wrote:Zabe, Amazing fucking verse. You didn't go all out on rhyming but this was a club track so it wasn't expected. Damn, you blew me out tha water, good looks ma *****.


Tha fuck? Ya'll banning W.I.G.G.E.R. now too?
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Re: Hard White (Up in the Club) [Remix] - Manix & Zabe

Postby J.R. » Jan 22nd, '12, 22:48

Zabe> Man1x. Overall Man1x, I didn't really like this verse...If you could call it that lol. Decent, but not what I expect from someone with your talents. Zabe, fantastic job. Keep at it.

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Re: Hard White (Up in the Club) [Remix] - Manix & Zabe

Postby Man1x » Jan 23rd, '12, 01:56

J.R. wrote:Zabe> Man1x. Overall Man1x, I didn't really like this verse...If you could call it that lol. Decent, but not what I expect from someone with your talents. Zabe, fantastic job. Keep at it.

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Ya ya I know, sorry Zabe for the half assed verse but I never have time to write any more and I kept you waiting long enough so I decided to type something quick.
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Re: Hard White (Up in the Club) [Remix] - Manix & Zabe

Postby SG. » Jan 30th, '12, 17:47

Oh shit, thought I left feed.

Manix, what the fuck, man? You let me down like Eminem let me down on Loyalty. And I ain't no Bizarre.

Just kidding with ya, but you could do a lot better. Also, thanks guys.
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Re: Hard White (Up in the Club) [Remix] - Manix & Zabe

Postby Man1x » Jan 30th, '12, 21:01

Zabe wrote:Oh shit, thought I left feed.

Manix, what the fuck, man? You let me down like Eminem let me down on Loyalty. And I ain't no Bizarre.

Just kidding with ya, but you could do a lot better. Also, thanks guys.


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Re: Hard White (Up in the Club) [Remix] - Manix & Zabe

Postby Enimee » Feb 7th, '12, 21:45

Idk if i would call this a remix, it was lacking alot of content, but the vibe was there...

it was a good start but i just dont feel like you guys followed through enough

nice try :D
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