[Track 3] Seizure

by **J.R.** » Jan 22nd, '12, 21:26

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xmULaBcrdb0
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=142806

[Begins at 56.]
I sit with a controller in hand,
Diet soda, Yeah I'm holding a can,
White flash, just like that I'm on the floor,
Dreaming of a place where my mind is gone no more,
I wake up to beeps and sounds all around,
I can hear people saying my breathings down,
Good bye to earth, I'm not believing the sound,
of myself saying to my peeps, "I'm leaving you now"
I can't believe I'ma drown to my death,
In a pool, just filled with regret.
Still, in this shit I'm just up to my neck,
Everythings gone, time to bust what's left.
My life, a downward spiral of nothing of value,
My friends don't get it, they just say "wow dude,
maybe you should get some meds, some valium?"
But just...how soon before that turns into a habit?
My life, Gotta hope and pray that I can grab it.

by **Slim Fiasco** » Jan 22nd, '12, 21:32

I liked that man, the imagery was very cool. I didn't even pay attention to the rhyming, so I guess the whole thing flowed naturally, at least in my mind. Keep it up!

by **J.R.** » Jan 22nd, '12, 21:39

Slim Fiasco wrote:I liked that man, the imagery was very cool. I didn't even pay attention to the rhyming, so I guess the whole thing flowed naturally, at least in my mind. Keep it up!

Thanks. and to those wondering, the track is short due to the instrumental not having a lot of time. :y: