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Typical TRShady Rap Song

Postby Blu » Feb 13th, '12, 04:01

i had no link of feed so Spyder shut me down
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Almostlity wrote:Grow up faggots

EminemInsider wrote:Jesus Christ, HOW FUCKING STUPID ARE YOU PEOPLE?!?!?!?!?!
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Re: Typical TRShady Rap Song

Postby VenomBlackViper » Feb 13th, '12, 11:48

I liked your flow, but your delivery could have been better. Also you need a new image, this psuedo cynical gimmick really isn't working & you just come off as a shallow, angry faggot trying to be different just for the sake of sticking out.
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