When fingertips speed

[Yah-hah]

Been awhile since I've even been here but hey fuck it right here a lil drop for the people!



I dont think I'm really ready to start writing let me crack my knuckles,
Can't shake past my trouble it only comes back in doubles,
I've laughed so subtle but once they strapped the muzzle I lost half the muscle,
Looking past the struggle, on my toes toppling over the wounderous clouded pyramids,
Every syllable carries 100 pounds of tears in it, bruised hands I clear em with,
"Same story" by Vinnie Paz echoes around my empty mind,
My neck could barely support the weight before I straight emptied mine,
Written this same song like 59 or 60 times,
Tired of seeing all these empty lies and wimpy tries through my shifty eyes,
'Take your heart back give me mine' I've said this so many times,
So many lines I've written and erased, written with no place,
My God is given to me with no face so I'm just sittin below space,
My body and my mind grow weaker by the minute,
Through the speakers that I get it to the creature that has sent it,
Man forget it now I'm just tryin to write some foolish shit,
No emotional multies, I'm emotionally lonely, I can't do this shit,
Wait a second who is this? writing my own thoughts of uselessness,
Just the venting I'm sending to empty the mind of a stupid kid,

Like this shit doesnt make me happy or any less agrressive,
Just gives me all my evil thoughts so I can repress them,
The canister that contains my bottled thoughts is about to explode,
Standind on this broken chair with a barbwire noose around my throat,
Look out world I'm bout to go, Heaven or hell I dont know better yet I dont care,
I know either place I get thrown I'm going no where, so I'm thinkin they're both scared,
Wait kid don't go there you dont wanna piss either one of thos guys off,
Well I'm past the point of waiting for either one of those guys to die off,
So I figure I'll have to meet them both sooner or later,
Or at least until someone disproves theres a savior,
Pushing my pen so hard that I'm bruising the paper,
Like I'm losing the flavor so some salt in my would would just be doing a favor

[Yah-hah]

Ha sorry Geno its been awhile

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[Sam.]

Fucking loved this. Your thoughts are simple, yet so impactful. Bars were elongated, but with the Multis, flowing this verse was easy. Have to say, this piece had some Quotable's that I liked very much.Smell of Poetry, is the last complement I would give this. It wasn't completely poetic, but in bits and pieces, it was.

[Yah-hah]

Appreciate it man. Yeah poetry is definitely the base of most of my writing. Sometimes I I just lose touch a bit. Feels good t be writing though

[BigBoss]

You're the best writer here IMO.

[Yah-hah]

You're the best writer here IMO.

Haha appreciate it bro. Didn't get a black name for nothin

[Ka0t1c]

good drop but at the end, it should be wound, hahaha, also typos if you care... muhahahah, and good to see u around

[Mr.DGAF]

This had a mellow feel to it. The way the multies line up makes the flow really easy to catch, I dig that. Lost of nice lines in here, it does have a bit of a poetic feel to it. Favorite line was the syllables carrying 100 pounds of tears, dope shit. I liked this man, it's obvious you're a good writer and I've seen some of your older stuff just browsing through the forum.

If you want, I'd definitely collab with you. If you haven't seen anything I've written or whatever, here's my latest piece haha http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=146749. If you feel like it'd be worth the time, hit me up. I saw your thread and figured I'd give it a shot, though that particular thread should probably be in the CW Lounge haha.

[Yah-hah]

Yeah I wasn't really around when the lounge was set up lol but aye appreciate everyone leaving some feedback. And Kaotic lmao I'm typing on my phone it corrects words sometimes lol but thanks again everyone for checkin

[Yah-hah]

Yo IDGAF you get my pm?

[Mr.DGAF]

I got one about you still finishing up some verses haha.

[Eedee]

This felt a bit poetic with some nice multis in there. I couldn't really get a feel for the flow since there's no beat and the lines seemed a bit too choppy for me.

This was a good drop though, nonetheless. Everyone else pretty much said it.

[gutawafang]

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

YOur multis never fail to impress me man. NEVER.

Read it twice before commenting this. It's fucking sick man. Fucking crazy shit.

[Yah-hah]

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

YOur multis never fail to impress me man. NEVER.

Read it twice before commenting this. It's fucking sick man. Fucking crazy shit.

Hahahaha hell yeah my biggest fan lmao how you been man

[gutawafang]

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

YOur multis never fail to impress me man. NEVER.

Read it twice before commenting this. It's fucking sick man. Fucking crazy shit.

Hahahaha hell yeah my biggest fan lmao how you been man

Hahahhahahahah word man. Whatever on facebook, it's just that. Just working for the government. We should collaborate again man. I stil remember one we did years ago man.