The Note

[Doodlebug]

I know its not rap but I wanted to share. I wrote this because a friend of my daughter was very blue.. I gave my girls some money, took them all to the mall for them to catch a movie, dine.. & just... have fun. I wrote it in my car - waiting for them.. no edits:

I later found a piece of music to illustrate and do multimedia to. (I used to be an illustrator) the art/animation is an old sheet of torn paper with the words being written on it and fading - then rewriting the next line.

Music I am going to animate it to: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/151445

The Note

I'll make them sorry
there nothing more to say...

Pen and paper
hands trembling

Pain beyond belief
sorrow beyond words

An emptiness I can no longer live with...



Day to day
guttural despair

I seem to all
a faded memory

A ghost to many
loved by only a few

And it’s like I just want them to realize
need for them to feel
the loss of me


In my mind
it’s so very simple

In a moment being
the next not

But this decision
is so hasty

born of a deep sadness
something my soul just cannot shake


Please see my pain
stop my tears

Hold me close
say no words

Just keep my hand
from completing
this note

Link of Feed: http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=146703

[Sam.]

If anyone is asked to go on stage and say something about themselves, in short, it would be some what like this. Just a few simple words, yet they speak in great volumes. Great work, I loved it.

[Sam.]

Definitely something I haven't seen in Creative Writing before. Interesting. Keep it up man.

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