Eedee - [6] It's No Use

[Eedee]

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=146622

Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=skFcR9_5 ... ure=relmfu

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I know what I'm writing will all be in vain,
I've been shackled by this bullshit; fall free it's chains.
Albeit blame is going for each one of you
When it's time to pay up you fuckers won't see nothing, dudes.
It's fucking true - let's open our brains a bit,
Let's do a mind session, I'm guessing this'll make me sick.
If a Eedee was in a forest and no one was around,
Does he still spit fucking sick shit? Growing underground
Is what he's doing with his writtens, a fucking guarantee,
That each one of his damn pieces will be barely seen.
That ain't fair to me, because they come out of the woodwork,
For other fucking people, "Nice rhymes, dude, good looks!"
Was it cuz I dissed Ego? That's water under bridges, shit,
Anyone who passes over me oughta munch a dick and lick.
That was only for fun to incite a spark or two,
We did that part for you, honestly wasn't hard to do.
And honestly it's fucking hard to try and keep my head,
Because I'm only seeing red when none of my fucking piece's fed.
While I'm being just a tad bit honest
I'm glad we're on it, because now it's time for fucking Catastrophic.
We're gonna battle on then, I feel we're being set aside,
We're getting by just fine cuz our goal's to be the best alive.
And we know that we're dope whether you tell us or not,
If you don't, your stomach has got a yellowish spot.
We say "hello" to lots and tell 'em what's on our mind,
It's no use to ask returns but fuck, at least we gotta try.
Don't wanna start a riot, it's just a simple task,
All we're asking you to do is feed, don't be a Simple Jack.
What's with the bullshit?
This is wack.

[Sam.]

Wack indeed. Nah, it was aiight. Not better than what you have written earlier. Seems like a rant in the form of rap lyrics. I didn't realize as to what you were saying until the 4th or 5th bar, haha. I didn't like the content, one bit. Rhymes were the only saving grace of this. Few name drops like Ego and some one, cool.

[Eedee]

Wack indeed. Nah, it was aiight. Not better than what you have written earlier. Seems like a rant in the form of rap lyrics. I didn't realize as to what you were saying until the 4th or 5th bar, haha. I didn't like the content, one bit. Rhymes were the only saving grace of this. Few name drops like Ego and some one, cool.

Felt like a rant? God forbid I write about what I'm thinking!

But seriously, thanks for the feed. Always can count on you feeding.