Freestyle

[Emadyville]

I kinda just wrote this in the vets section in 4 bar intervals, yeah it was pretty much a freestyle minus spitting on a mic, I don't even have a beat but figured I'd post:

They might not like I don't have time in the streets,
But they'd love the fact I can rhyme to a beat,
Plus with this passion being designed to compete,
I know I'd of blown up yeah I'd climb to the peak,
Plus with every line I'm inclined to repeat,
In a different way the genius every time I speak,
Cause I go all out and fuckin grind the weak,
Till I'm the only left with my mind won't delete,
The shit I've been through as I find what I seek,
I'm all about the money but each dime is bleak,
Cause money makes assholes and if I'm what I eat,
I'm a rapper, fuck six feet I'll end up nine deep,
But I ain't goin out yet so when my spine leaks,
And I'm layin dead dying fucking lining the sheets,
For my coffin I'm a turn to a ghost, rewind pleats,
And resurrect myself, hell I'll turn into a prime beast...

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[Emadyville]

Just as dope as it was in the vet section. Solid drop for a quick freestyle. You're like the only guy I know who can write a 16 that quick and have it be dope lol. You should continue publishing them.

I loved the ending 4 the most. Very vivid imagery there.

And the rhyme scheme the same the whole time...awesome.

glad you enjoyed it, and were the only one who saw as i posted each 4 bars so youre the only one who knows its legit haha and yeah i had to go with the same rhyme scheme, and glad you liked the ending, tbh the first 4 and the last 4 just came to me and it flowed outta my mind like it was supposed to happen. I should look at the time stamps and see how long it actually was to type/write all that

[Emadyville]

Yeah it definitely wasn't long. 10 minutes or less.

it was 10 minutes for me to think of and type that out. i'd say that pretty close to a legit freestyle for a forum

[Emadyville]

Something about your writing Emady, it always makes me want you to start recording again! C'mon son, this shit is dope but would be 100 times doper on audio.

With that said, it's great for a freestyle. The structure is fuckin tight as hell

The thing I like about your style is that...you don't seem to follow the same typical multi formula, you switch it up and it keeps the entire piece fresh. That's something I've noticed a lot with your stuff, it's dope.

damn, can't even explain how much that means to me. i'm curious how you mean i switch up the typical multi formula? i mean maybe not for this piece, but even still, how do you mean? cause i assume it might have to do with my last album, but either way appreciate it, cause i know i work hard at it, or did until i couldnt record anymore

[Wreck]

I kinda just wrote this in the vets section in 4 bar intervals, yeah it was pretty much a freestyle minus spitting on a mic, I don't even have a beat but figured I'd post:

They might not like I don't have time in the streets,
But they'd love the fact I can rhyme to a beat,
Plus with this passion being designed to compete,
I know I'd of blown up yeah I'd climb to the peak,
Plus with every line I'm inclined to repeat,
In a different way the genius every time I speak,
Cause I go all out and fuckin grind the weak,
Till I'm the only left with my mind won't delete,
The shit I've been through as I find what I seek,
I'm all about the money but each dime is bleak,
Cause money makes assholes and if I'm what I eat,
I'm a rapper, fuck six feet I'll end up nine deep,
But I ain't goin out yet so when my spine leaks,
And I'm layin dead dying fucking lining the sheets,
For my coffin I'm a turn to a ghost, rewind pleats,
And resurrect myself, hell I'll turn into a prime beast...

This was fucking dope as hell man, incredible multis, what's most impressive, not only the wordplay & the storytelling, but most of all, how you were able to keep the same multis throughout the verse/piece is amazing to me, pretty much 8 Mile Road like. Thoroughly enjoyed reading this too, you should definitely make it into a song, & we should collab sometime as well, if you're down. Really nice job man, keep up the good work .

[Emadyville]

Well i honestly dont even do that shit on purpose, all i can say is maybe the amount of time i have spent over the years rhyming has made that happen, idk. But you both heard the album so you know I have the skill in most of the categories so I don't have to preach but I'm glad you liked it, and it was off the top so its even better I guess.

And yeah wreck i'm down to collab whenever, just might have to gimme time, i work 7 days a week for the most part and i shoulda been in bed 3 hrs ago already, so im here and there but i'd def make it happen.

[Wreck]

Beat you to it Molezo

Actually his first two lines in my post are five syllables, FAGGOT!

Word but it's the same point -:D

You two are like brothers I swear. Do I have to break y'all up? Lol.

Well i honestly dont even do that shit on purpose, all i can say is maybe the amount of time i have spent over the years rhyming has made that happen, idk. But you both heard the album so you know I have the skill in most of the categories so I don't have to preach but I'm glad you liked it, and it was off the top so its even better I guess.

And yeah wreck i'm down to collab whenever, just might have to gimme time, i work 7 days a week for the most part and i shoulda been in bed 3 hrs ago already, so im here and there but i'd def make it happen.

Don't worry, great writers sometimes don't even do it on purpose, it's called just being dope lol. They were just breaking it down, at how dope you make the syllables short but sweet, & I agree. It makes for better rhyming a lot of times when this is done .

You have to send me your album though, I got one coming out too, real hip hop man. & awesome man, I understand you're busy, so just hit me up when you're free & we can bounce ideas/run beats by each other & shit, etc. look forward to it. Actually, it's quite amazing & impressive that you write that well, considering you work so much on top of it. Props to you there bro.

[Mr.DGAF]

Good stuff. Favorite line was the are what you eat line. Set up's played but it still worked.

[mdemaz]

I never really seen anything wrong with switching the syllables up, it's incredibly hard and tedious to write a consistent 4 syllable formula without the lyrics sounding ridiculous and boring.
As long as the lyrics flow good, that's all that matters.

Great read, keep it up.

[Emadyville]

You have to send me your album though, I got one coming out too, real hip hop man. & awesome man, I understand you're busy, so just hit me up when you're free & we can bounce ideas/run beats by each other & shit, etc. look forward to it. Actually, it's quite amazing & impressive that you write that well, considering you work so much on top of it. Props to you there bro.

yeah uh actually here it is: http://www.hotnewhiphop.com/d-dubs-the- ... .5022.html

and yeah actually since you know im so damn busy, if you have an idea and/or beat just hit me up, i can write about anything.

o btw this album was my last since i started working so much so i havent recorded in awhile, this album came out in nov of '10

and thanks to DGAF and mdemaz, appreciate you both reading

[Sam.]

Do I need to say how dope this was? Everything I wanted to say is already said in this thread. Keep up the good work.

[Eedee]

That was a fun read. You sorta kept the same rhyme scheme going the whole time but messed up a few syllables here and there. Good drop, nothing really else to say.

[Emadyville]

I still bump it haha

you still bump my album?


and thanks to the other feeds, appreciate it

[Wreck]

You have to send me your album though, I got one coming out too, real hip hop man. & awesome man, I understand you're busy, so just hit me up when you're free & we can bounce ideas/run beats by each other & shit, etc. look forward to it. Actually, it's quite amazing & impressive that you write that well, considering you work so much on top of it. Props to you there bro.

yeah uh actually here it is: http://www.hotnewhiphop.com/d-dubs-the- ... .5022.html

and yeah actually since you know im so damn busy, if you have an idea and/or beat just hit me up, i can write about anything.

o btw this album was my last since i started working so much so i havent recorded in awhile, this album came out in nov of '10

and thanks to DGAF and mdemaz, appreciate you both reading

Sounds good, & will do . Do you have any interest in being in the TRShady rap battle tournament coming up? You're real lyrical, I think you would do well, but with your work schedule, it's up to you.

[Emadyville]

nah man, i work too much plus my weekdays i never really know how long i'll work, and weekends they've been scheduling me to work doubles (gotta work 22 hrs sat/sun in addition to my 40+ this week) so it's best i dont. plus i love judging them, done it a few times by commission or randomly they ask me cause i'm a gmod or when i was admin or whatever, but yeah the most i'll do now is judge but i appreciate the offer.

btw we def gotta work on something withing the next week