The TRshady Forum became read-only in December 2014. The 10 year history will live on, in this archive.
Continue the discussion with the new home for the Eminem and Hip Hop discussion: HipHopShelter.com.

Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Want to share a poem, story or a moving article? Share creative literature text here.

Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Postby J.R. » Aug 3rd, '12, 09:24

Wreck Link of Feed- viewtopic.php?f=24&t=147150
Mr. DGAF Link of Feed- viewtopic.php?f=24&t=147039&p=1950930#p1950930

Beat- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z_WmxusVmhg

(Intro- .13 seconds)

Oh (x8)

(Verse 1- Wreck- @ .27 seconds)

We got enough missiles here to say "fuck pistols"
A trunk full of a bunch of nickles, uhh DGAF, this'll
be enough to shit on their "pennies for your thoughts" quote
Stick some in a few cough drops, yeah that'll make your boss choke
When she's drivin, call my cock "Ford"- cause it'll make her go off-road
Pry the dick in Mariah, call me Richard Pryor- I'm off Coke
I told the bitch isn't it a "gag (joke)," tied her up & said we need to bond more
Stab the law enforce-ment, inside of the building's concourse, indeed
Then I Grabbed the rifle from the Eagles QB Ron Jaworsk-i
High as fuck, on some morphine, can you give me more please?
Get the punch bitch? I told her I'd untie her if she got the joke there
She mumbled "I Don't Care" like Show Tufli, so I lit a smoke in her hair
then proceeded to let it out, & burned the cig on her head
Bitch, I'm an Irish motherfucker, one more jig & I'm dead
She finally gave up, I was tired, so I said he's the Polish rifle
told her to hold this mic 'til, I roll up in the motorcycle
Fireworks here, fuck Drake, this is the TR Shade crew
this is boot camp bitch, I tied her back up, now are you ready for day 2?


(Chorus x2- Wreck- at 1:19)

Fireworks light up the sky
Man I'm so fuckin high
Lyricism, it's so cut & dry
We haven't blown up yet, I wonder why

Smoke in the air, it's been raining since
Ding Ding ding, there's the bell, time for the main event
Your flow's gayer than Clay Aiken's sex
DGAF & Wreck, the best? Yes, they can check.


(Verse 2- Mr. DGAF- at 1:45)

Fuck a firework -- I'm launching cuban missile crisis 2
You should listen while I do this, use precision writing through
A slew of different rhyming tools fused with instant timing too
Through precision I can move through and switch up my groove
Then I vibe, maneuver to throw a wrench in this game
Sick insane using pens as an aid, winning this race,
Instruments played while I pick up the pace
Demented brain, no sense in saying if he's mentally sane
Spitting writtens get's you instantly drained
His mission's plain, no time for breathing, just go
If I say you're flow is clean I probably mean it's a joke
I'm teasing though, the king of cults, now I'm leading the ones
Speaking in tounges, message evil cause I'm seeking some blood
Possessing people, turning heads like I'm the Exorcist
The devils kid from hell I'm sent to heaven with
Eleven kids that never quit to sever shit, not wrong to say
I'm sick as hell with thoughts deranged
From sickle cell and often say some shit that fails to stop the pain
So listen well and jot your name, I'll figure where to stock complaints
In wishing wells with drops of rain that build but there's a fault in saying
It would bail and fall with age 'cause then I'd sail the thoughts of hate
In ships compared to yachts or planes, I've got a name
But lost it in Minaj's A, S.S. like the captain
Skipper stripping down the magic mic for rapping
Stick to slacking if you think you'll catch me, wait a sec
My brain's a mess from craziness I gaze at wreck,
No place to rest inside the danger, yes I know it now
The ground opens, the hole is round, I slow it down
Shit, I get figured once I started rapping it would open me
But nothing seems to want to lead me to who I'm supposed to be
I'm focused and intent on knowing who I am
My foolish plans have lead me to this useless land
I hope I've found the only thing to tell me who I really was
But if I didn't frankly it's okay, cause I don't give a fuck.


(Chorus x2- Wreck- at 2:38)

Fireworks light up the sky
Man I'm so fuckin high
Lyricism, it's so cut & dry
We haven't blown up yet, I wonder why

Smoke in the air, it's been raining since
Ding Ding ding, there's the bell, time for the main event
Your flow's gayer than Clay Aiken's sex
DGAF & Wreck, the best? Yes, they can check.


(Verse 3- Wreck 1st 8 lines/Mr. DGAF last 8 lines- at 3:04)

I entertain w/ spastic attacks, complain of flaccid ejac(ulations)
I needed to breathe like Fab, cause my motherfuckin asthma is back
Don't Give A Fuck & Wreck, it's a caucasion-over, AKA a white-rap
Nate Dogg's voice? "I Like That." Brb, I left my left ear on my right back
Sex scandals, will make a man look dumber than Jeff Daniels
So this is the next annual, rap forum battle's tourney text panel
Can't spell Chick-Fil-A without chick, so c'mon, grab a gal & a bucket of chicken
You wanna suck on a Christian? What? I'm not a schmuck, but fuck it, I'm listenin'
We've come on a mission to smoke the rappers claiming
They're the baddest player, grabbing stacks of paper
Actions catered to their "mass of haters", losing sight of lyrics
When the massive label claps when playing useless rhyming gimmicks
Who should fight the business? Me and wreck
We the best and won't be switching schemes to get
Newer fans, move your heads for a movement planned
To get music back into some useful hands before it's ruined, man.

(Chorus x2- Wreck- at 3:57)

Fireworks light up the sky
Man I'm so fuckin high
Lyricism, it's so cut & dry
We haven't blown up yet, I wonder why

Smoke in the air, it's been raining since
Ding Ding ding, there's the bell, time for the main event
Your flow's gayer than Clay Aiken's sex
DGAF & Wreck, the best? Yes, they can check.
Image
User avatar
J.R.
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2045
Joined: May 8th, '11, 18:38
Gender: Male

Re: Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Aug 3rd, '12, 09:40

Just an fyi, my solo verse goes double time after "Fuck a firework" until the start of the "Slow it down" line. :y:

Good shit Wreck, and J.R., hope we opened out the tape properly haha.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

Image
Image
Quest for Six
Team Emma Stone
Buns till amazing... :')
User avatar
Mr.DGAF
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2349
Joined: Aug 15th, '11, 04:10
Location: In the back seat of your truck, with duct tape stretched out.
Gender: Male

Re: Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Postby J.R. » Aug 3rd, '12, 09:50

Gods job guys
Image
User avatar
J.R.
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2045
Joined: May 8th, '11, 18:38
Gender: Male

Re: Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Postby Eedee » Aug 3rd, '12, 11:55

That was awesome. Good way to start the tape.
Image
mdemaz wrote:dam
User avatar
Eedee
Eye-Raping-Fudgepop
Eye-Raping-Fudgepop
 
Posts: 11719
Joined: Aug 7th, '11, 06:11
Location: Free food
Gender: Male

Re: Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Postby Eedee » Aug 3rd, '12, 11:56

J.R. wrote:Gods job guys


I wouldn't go THAT far... this piece we can actually see. ;)
Image
mdemaz wrote:dam
User avatar
Eedee
Eye-Raping-Fudgepop
Eye-Raping-Fudgepop
 
Posts: 11719
Joined: Aug 7th, '11, 06:11
Location: Free food
Gender: Male

Re: Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Postby J.R. » Aug 3rd, '12, 18:09

It was 5 am and I posted that on my iPod, fuck you :3
Image
User avatar
J.R.
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2045
Joined: May 8th, '11, 18:38
Gender: Male

Re: Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Aug 3rd, '12, 20:12

Thanks guys, appreciate the feed. :y:
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

Image
Image
Quest for Six
Team Emma Stone
Buns till amazing... :')
User avatar
Mr.DGAF
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2349
Joined: Aug 15th, '11, 04:10
Location: In the back seat of your truck, with duct tape stretched out.
Gender: Male

Re: Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Postby Wreck » Aug 3rd, '12, 23:03

Thanks for posting this J.R. & thanks for the feed guys, yeah the flow was confusing cause my friend here did a really fast flow, & I did a slow flow, so I'm sure it threw people off, at least at first for some, but I'm glad everyone liked it.
My Beats Page- https://www.facebook.com/pages/Wreckles ... 08?fref=ts
Image
My Debut Album- Life or Death- Coming Soon
User avatar
Wreck
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3511
Joined: Sep 5th, '08, 23:19
Location: South Jersey
Gender: Male

Re: Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Postby Sam. » Aug 4th, '12, 00:19

This is definitely fire. Both of you just brought it and Mr.DGAF lost it. I mean, he just set off and spit more bars than Wreck.

Wreck, dude, you started off well, but the 1st verse fell flat after the 6th bar, the content was very sloppy and not as entertaining as the the 1st half. Your 2nd verse with him was off the charts, really good work. Multies were great. Like always you bought something crazy, something different to the table. I've always admires this thing about you. NO HOMO.

Mr. DGAF just went into a beast mode and unleashed a very lethal and horrifying verse. The multis were good but weren't smooth throughout the first verse. Second verse was just fine in this department. Content was entertaining, TBH.

@OP: The LOF aren't proper, edit them and try and post the same link again. Just trying to help, now. :p
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
Image
Image
User avatar
Sam.
Bad Influence
Bad Influence
 
Posts: 16630
Joined: Jun 7th, '10, 11:10
Location: India
Gender: Male

Re: Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Postby Wreck » Aug 4th, '12, 07:55

Sam. wrote:This is definitely fire. Both of you just brought it and Mr.DGAF lost it. I mean, he just set off and spit more bars than Wreck.

Wreck, dude, you started off well, but the 1st verse fell flat after the 6th bar, the content was very sloppy and not as entertaining as the the 1st half. Your 2nd verse with him was off the charts, really good work. Multies were great. Like always you bought something crazy, something different to the table. I've always admires this thing about you. NO HOMO.

Mr. DGAF just went into a beast mode and unleashed a very lethal and horrifying verse. The multis were good but weren't smooth throughout the first verse. Second verse was just fine in this department. Content was entertaining, TBH.

@OP: The LOF aren't proper, edit them and try and post the same link again. Just trying to help, now. :p


Thanks for the very long, well-thought out feed man, appreciate it.
My Beats Page- https://www.facebook.com/pages/Wreckles ... 08?fref=ts
Image
My Debut Album- Life or Death- Coming Soon
User avatar
Wreck
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3511
Joined: Sep 5th, '08, 23:19
Location: South Jersey
Gender: Male

Re: Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Postby J.R. » Aug 4th, '12, 08:39

No criticism. Dope drop from both of you. Gonna miss DGAF solo drops :(
Image
User avatar
J.R.
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2045
Joined: May 8th, '11, 18:38
Gender: Male

Re: Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Postby Wreck » Aug 4th, '12, 08:40

J.R. wrote:No criticism. Dope drop from both of you. Gonna miss DGAF solo drops :(


Thanks again man, & yeah I know, it sucks. Trying to convince him to do some more solo drops later on down the line once he does some group projects :y:.
My Beats Page- https://www.facebook.com/pages/Wreckles ... 08?fref=ts
Image
My Debut Album- Life or Death- Coming Soon
User avatar
Wreck
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3511
Joined: Sep 5th, '08, 23:19
Location: South Jersey
Gender: Male

Re: Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Postby Eedee » Aug 4th, '12, 08:42

Wreck wrote:
J.R. wrote:No criticism. Dope drop from both of you. Gonna miss DGAF solo drops :(


Thanks again man, & yeah I know, it sucks. Trying to convince him to do some more solo drops later on down the line once he does some group projects :y:.


I'll talk to that piece of shit about it.

:wub:
Image
mdemaz wrote:dam
User avatar
Eedee
Eye-Raping-Fudgepop
Eye-Raping-Fudgepop
 
Posts: 11719
Joined: Aug 7th, '11, 06:11
Location: Free food
Gender: Male

Re: Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Postby Wreck » Aug 4th, '12, 08:46

Eedee wrote:
Wreck wrote:
J.R. wrote:No criticism. Dope drop from both of you. Gonna miss DGAF solo drops :(


Thanks again man, & yeah I know, it sucks. Trying to convince him to do some more solo drops later on down the line once he does some group projects :y:.


I'll talk to that piece of shit about it.

:wub:


:laughing: :laughing: ok, fair enough.
My Beats Page- https://www.facebook.com/pages/Wreckles ... 08?fref=ts
Image
My Debut Album- Life or Death- Coming Soon
User avatar
Wreck
Role Model
Role Model
 
Posts: 3511
Joined: Sep 5th, '08, 23:19
Location: South Jersey
Gender: Male

Re: Mr. DGAF ft. Wreck- Fireworks (TR Shady Tape Intro)

Postby Mr.DGAF » Aug 4th, '12, 18:17

Hahaha thanks for feeding everyone.

Wreck I'ma hit you up once the battle's are done about that collab.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

Image
Image
Quest for Six
Team Emma Stone
Buns till amazing... :')
User avatar
Mr.DGAF
Renegade
Renegade
 
Posts: 2349
Joined: Aug 15th, '11, 04:10
Location: In the back seat of your truck, with duct tape stretched out.
Gender: Male

Next

Return to Creative Writing



Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users

cron