Everyday Struggle (Real Life)- TR Shady Tape- Track # 5

[Wreck]

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(Intro)
Uhh
Wreck
TR Shade
real life shit y'all
it's fucked up though

But ayo
Just listen for a sec


(Verse 1)
So many problems right here, & still no answers
So many bother, I can see the "signs" just like a Cancer
Family problems, both moms & pops sides are divided
Sometimes I'm like, "Why even bother to try, shit" it's a problem like my sinuses
Allegations from my aunt about the other one stealing money
From my Grandparents bank account, real problems like that aint even funny
Been called bad things from my Dad, just cause I won't get in the middle
of his court dates vs. My Mom, like I'm your son, keep me out & don't belittle
No chivalry, this is real life shit, not just a bump in the road or little sneeze
I'm about to set em straight, & pour out my emotions & kill this beat
I don't want to be boasted about, just respected & loved
So many people see the rap name, like "Wreckless" is thug
Avoid what the haters say, beautiful weather right now- such an amazing day
Sometimes I feel like I just wanna fade away, but I just stop the breaks & wave
Don't need the cake, but it would be great to have, I'm just saving up to say
I made it, I did on my own, independance, Mom & Dad, just be proud & pray


(Chorus x2)
Real life shit, it's an everyday struggle
Barking dogs in the family, time for straight muzzles
It's a crazed puzzle, no day's ever subtle
So with that non-approach in mind, I stage a rebuttle


(Verse 2)
I'm finally in the process of picking up the pieces, no longer see clouds
People try to figure me out, I won't change, that ain't what I'm about
Try to be a straight shooter, & remain a good person
Loyal, trust, but sometimes I become a different person
But tired of medical problems, waking up feeling like total shit
I feel like, "when will it quit," when can I finally be a vocalist?
& have a say in things, not just a rag doll for you to drag around
Ain't 'nothin to brag about, I can be a leader & carry the flag about
Just wanna enjoy hangin out, whether with friends, or non-crazed family
You can't be safe w/ one's insanity, insecurities, so disrepaired like a cavity
No need for children to get in the mix between adult matters
You know the saying- "Same shit, different day" like being an adult even matters
Wish I could revert back to my younger days, childhood at its finest
Put the crazy shit in the past behind us, the tape- I wish I could rewind it
or at least move on with life, but in a positive way
Done w/ drama, & the lies, they're full of shit like they're constipate(d)

(Chorus x2)
Real life shit, it's an everyday struggle
Barking dogs in the family, time for straight muzzles
It's a crazed puzzle, no day's ever subtle
So with that non-approach in mind, I stage a rebuttle


(Verse 3)
I tackle real life problems, & put 'em into spoken word
Got a few chosen words, for the people that are crazed, & so absurd
Trying to find steady peace, oh a bird, think I'll sing the Bob Marley song
This aint a sorry song, life is not always a party, like Marty Gras
& for those who cope w/ life that way- I don't agree w/ it, so be it, party on
People act like they're ever hardly wrong, but realistically, the majority's spawned
Filled w/ deceitful thoughts, debating on whether they should plot revenge
This week I copped the Ten- commandments, & I got to send
God a letter, like Box Car Racer, pouring out my inner thoughts
Had some jitters, thought, I'm only a beginner, but realistically, I'm a winner, dog
Every Day Struggles? (W/ my Dad)- failure to communicate? You debate
But really, who's to say, I'm confused & crazed, when really, I'm the newest saint
Writing helps me cope, so does music, sonically speaking
I'm ironically tweaking, this atomic newton, seeking peace &
While crafting a different form of science on the newest tape
So I drudge through the mudd of everyday struggles, but the darkness I illuminate


(Chorus x2)
Real life shit, it's an everyday struggle
Barking dogs in the family, time for straight muzzles
It's a crazed puzzle, no day's subtle
So with that non-approach in mind, I stage a rebuttle


(Outro)

Yo
You heard it first

Listen, Take this advice
Bear with me here y'all
Demons in life are only successfully conquered by those who continue to fight through it
& manage to maintain it, for the most part. So think about that next time a problem occurs.

(Music 'til end)

[Mr.DGAF]

This was nice with the emotions man. The rhyming was iffy at some points but for the most part it was nice as always, especially with the topic you used. That's some tough stuff there man, but the lyrics worked well in painting a pretty vivid picture of all the shit you're dealing with. I'm a sucker for the introspective shit anyways, but this was nice. Props man.

[Wreck]

This was nice with the emotions man. The rhyming was iffy at some points but for the most part it was nice as always, especially with the topic you used. That's some tough stuff there man, but the lyrics worked well in painting a pretty vivid picture of all the shit you're dealing with. I'm a sucker for the introspective shit anyways, but this was nice. Props man.

Thanks for the feed man, & thank you, I was going through a lot, & still am, so I thought I'd put some personal info in the song. & yeah, I was just going for emotion, not necessarily lyrics, even though I tried my best. Thanks again bro .

[Atone]

see, i like this because you put real issues in this, like, deep shit, that's what all music needs

not only that but you made it rhyme smoothly, the bars were great, everything fit perfect man

[Eedee]

As DGAF said, nice emotions, for sure.

I didn't particularity care for the rhyming, myself, but it was decent enough. Solid drop for this TR Tape, though.

[J.R.]

This reminds me more or less of myself when I was first on the site. More content, less lyricism. Except you have a bit more lyricism than I did. By bit, I mean a lot dude. Lol. Like Eedee said, you didn't have great rhyming, but it was decent. The emotions were nice. I liked it