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[1] Just The Two of us [CC]

Postby Atone » Sep 20th, '12, 15:21

Referance - viewtopic.php?f=24&t=25169


[Intro J.R., Atone]
Hey..Atone, they forgot us.
Their egos must be getting too high.
It's catastrophic what that can do to you man..
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This is where we drop the bomb on em
these mother fuckers don't know what's coming, GET EM


[Verse 1](J.R)
Anyway, time to show this section and everyone that we back,
Re-attach ourselves, dedicating time to not slackin and bein wack,
Matter of fact, everyone's wondering why we make good friend's,
Well when we were enemies, No one else and I had chemistry in the end,
And I always tend to go back to my roots, so just like rap, im here with you,
True, that may sound like some faggot-ish, but faggot does and faggot gets,
Ah shit, I should spit some more rhymes, we're more lost than my cosh miss,
Or when Geno spit a subliminal diss and I didn't catch it and got all pissed,
Anyone else remember this? The point is, around that same time was,
the last time CC rapped as group, shoot, and I bet you missed us too.
Lets get current..Blu drops feed, and everyone's like "You dissin us Blu?!"
Not me, see, I appreciate some truth, and he's a pretty cool dude,
I just wish once in a while he'd drop too, because he'd comfirm what we knew,
that he probably ain't no better than the fuckin' truth.*
and nah, I ain't butthurt dude, attack me, say that I suck,
Creative control will repeat what we told you, WE NEVER GAVE A FUCK!


(Verse)(Atone)
Nope, not alotta fucks givin - fuck ya blah blah you sucka's talk alotta
goo goo- ga-ga YOU got me so hoo hoo ha ha, ooh you babies shoot poo poo?
HA HAAAAA,


alright time to just get to it and hit you with
shit stupid so you kids lose it, get nooses, and just do it
hang yourself to this music, cuz this is true shit
i act the rudest, better go grab ya ooozies
cuz only we leave is if you kids shoot us
we troopers, we do this to take ya for a loop
ya think we wack? fuck you i'm aimin for the hoop
ballin on mother fuckers and i don't need swag
i got class like i'm teachin you fags
are you mad? ahh you got it bad
jealousy and envy of emcee's so ill
comin deep with skill
this is creative control mother fucker we takin the wheel
drivin you haters crazy cuz we keepin it real



Atone Link Of Feed: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=148244&p=1993374#p1993374
J.R Link Of Feed: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=148038
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Re: [1] Just The Two of us [CC]

Postby J.R. » Sep 20th, '12, 17:56

You killed it. Any insults are jokes .
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Re: [1] Just The Two of us [CC]

Postby Eedee » Sep 20th, '12, 22:31

J.R. wrote:You killed it. Any insults are jokes .


... :laughing:

I'll feed this in a bit, I have to get to class. Shame I opened this thread right before I had to go.
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Re: [1] Just The Two of us [CC]

Postby J.R. » Sep 21st, '12, 01:11

Indeed. This is for the Creative Control EP.

That is for the 2418 EP, I'm waiting on you and Slacking on the DGAF track with DGGAF..

NOW FEED MEH PIECE!
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Re: [1] Just The Two of us [CC]

Postby Eedee » Sep 21st, '12, 02:55

Okay, so...

That intro had me rolling. :laughing: I was like "holy shit they're calling out Ego." Then I read on and you called out me and my pimp.

If you're going to diss someone, at least back it up with good rhymes, flow, lyricism, etc. You guys didn't.

I'm sorry but this was terrible. Atone... just no. What was that?

JR, your flow, what the fuck, that was shit. Where were the multis?

This was really bad... and no beat? Yeah, you guys are hard.
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Re: [1] Just The Two of us [CC]

Postby J.R. » Sep 21st, '12, 03:03

Menzo wrote:You dissin' Ego, you dissin' Geno...you dissin' me son :shakehead:

People so mad nowadays. Obviously, I was kind of just joking at the fact Geno had said he didn't know who CC was and he thought knew all the groups in the section. That's why I included catastrophic in the intro. Wasn't a diss, more like a reference or joke.. Same with the Geno line later in the track.

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Re: [1] Just The Two of us [CC]

Postby Eedee » Sep 21st, '12, 03:06

J.R. wrote:
Menzo wrote:You dissin' Ego, you dissin' Geno...you dissin' me son :shakehead:

People so mad nowadays. Obviously, I was kind of just joking at the fact Geno had said he didn't know who CC was and he thought knew all the groups in the section. That's why I included catastrophic in the intro. Wasn't a diss, more like a reference or joke.. Same with the Geno line later in the track.

Thanks Eeedee.


That's twice you've called our groups out. It's not a very funny "joke" and you should've stopped after the first one, considering who you're calling out. Just sayin'.
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Re: [1] Just The Two of us [CC]

Postby Atone » Sep 21st, '12, 03:14

i thought when he mentioned Ego he was litterally meaning people's ego, no beef intended in this peice
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Re: [1] Just The Two of us [CC]

Postby J.R. » Sep 21st, '12, 03:15

Lmao, inb4superharddiss. I'm not a battler, and "considering who I'm dissing.." Look, I know ego is better than me, but I've known Menzo/Geno since I signed up and first dropped. All I'm looking for is to get better. Geno knows what remarks I'm referring to and probably understands this wasn't a diss, just a mention. Sorry for mentioning your group? You were filler for fucks sake, your only in the damn piece cuz your a fuckin group . It was just a nice way to put it in, go be upset somewhere else dude. It's bitches like you that make TR annoying , I said it wasn't a diss and proved it, don't make it a fucking argument.
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Re: [1] Just The Two of us [CC]

Postby J.R. » Sep 21st, '12, 03:22

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Re: [1] Just The Two of us [CC]

Postby Eedee » Sep 21st, '12, 03:35

J.R. wrote:Lmao, inb4superharddiss. I'm not a battler, and "considering who I'm dissing.." Look, I know ego is better than me, but I've known Menzo/Geno since I signed up and first dropped. All I'm looking for is to get better. Geno knows what remarks I'm referring to and probably understands this wasn't a diss, just a mention. Sorry for mentioning your group? You were filler for fucks sake, your only in the damn piece cuz your a fuckin group . It was just a nice way to put it in, go be upset somewhere else dude. It's bitches like you that make TR annoying , I said it wasn't a diss and proved it, don't make it a fucking argument.


Lol. You name dropped both our groups then went on to say "This is where we drop the bomb on em
these mother fuckers don't know what's coming, GET EM"
. Yeah... that's totally not a diss.

You didn't prove shit. If anything, you're just making yourself look more foolish by backing off so quickly when some of your "targets" said something about it. Just admit this was a diss, holy shit. Don't be such a pussy.
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Re: [1] Just The Two of us [CC]

Postby Atone » Sep 21st, '12, 03:41

Eedee wrote:
J.R. wrote:Lmao, inb4superharddiss. I'm not a battler, and "considering who I'm dissing.." Look, I know ego is better than me, but I've known Menzo/Geno since I signed up and first dropped. All I'm looking for is to get better. Geno knows what remarks I'm referring to and probably understands this wasn't a diss, just a mention. Sorry for mentioning your group? You were filler for fucks sake, your only in the damn piece cuz your a fuckin group . It was just a nice way to put it in, go be upset somewhere else dude. It's bitches like you that make TR annoying , I said it wasn't a diss and proved it, don't make it a fucking argument.


Lol. You name dropped both our groups then went on to say "This is where we drop the bomb on em
these mother fuckers don't know what's coming, GET EM"
. Yeah... that's totally not a diss.

You didn't prove shit. If anything, you're just making yourself look more foolish by backing off so quickly when some of your "targets" said something about it. Just admit this was a diss, holy shit. Don't be such a pussy.


he said the underlined parts, i added the last 2 lines, as in drop a bomb on everybody, you need to calm the hell down cuz your making this seem worse than it is, i don't take shots at anybody in my verse, i'm talking to everybody, so hill out dude i never had any issues with you
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Re: [1] Just The Two of us [CC]

Postby J.R. » Sep 21st, '12, 03:44

That was Atone's part. I had no clue he was going to do that until it was posted, and to be fair without it it's not a diss. You can't deny that. Without it, it's a mention. Maybe what could be taken as an aggressive name drop if you're a sensitive pussy, but still.

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Re: [1] Just The Two of us [CC]

Postby Eedee » Sep 21st, '12, 03:47

Oh sorry, I assumed since you're a group you guys were talking and stuff while writing so you thought of ideas and shit. Sorry. I apologize for thinking you two were a CW group.
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Re: [1] Just The Two of us [CC]

Postby J.R. » Sep 21st, '12, 03:50

We were talking. Yknow, I sent my part of the intro and shit to him and my verse with the concept already in our heads.

He probably didn't get the name drops (he doesn't feed in here a lot be honest) and assumed it was to everyone.

There ya go.

Drop it. Not worth it anymore.
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