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Eedee - "Second Person"

Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '12, 05:25

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[Verse] (:21)
So I'm trying to see this from your fucking point of view,
Fuckin' asshole like Ryan JR, I'ma call you Royce da 2.
But seriously, I just wanted to fucking use that,
You tell me I need to fuck off? Yeah, go ahead and do that.
String some syllables together and make 'em rhyme, then we'll talk,
I can wait for this forever, take your time. Pen is off?
I don't doubt it, I mean, you're teaming up with Atone,
That's like having a fucking cell phone but ringing up a pay phone.
Nothing against the guy but he just can't take a hint
He fucking pretends like he's a star and that he'll someday make it big.
So I'm lookin' for a fight, huh? What if I say "you suck"?
I'll "pop" you more than Lighters, so, um, put your dukes up?
So we forgot you? Now it seems you're pissed at me,
You've been gone so long we ALL forgot you - you're history.
Maybe if you dropped some shit - nah, I'm beating THAT horse.
What does CC stand for again? ... Crash Course?
How can you control something you never had in the first place?
Atone sucks at rap and JR? Well, you're the worst, mate.
I know Atone apologized, and JR I guess you kinda did,
But keep on reading and you'll find out unless you tried to miss
The point I'm trying to make is that if there's a beef, I'm all in,
I doubt JR will read this but hey, see, I'm calm and
I really didn't wanna do this but screw this, let's move, bitch
CW needs a spark to keep their hearts alive, yo, are you in?
Look, I don't wanna beef but a man has gotta eat,
I'm only kidding with ya'll, understand I'm sorry, jeez.
So if you wanna call it quits, I'm cool with that and I'm done,
But let's have a little tussle for the hell of it, sound like fun?
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Re: Eedee - "Second Person"

Postby J.R. » Sep 22nd, '12, 06:17

Nice! :laughing: I especially like the "I doubt jr will read this" line. Haha.

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And no, I don't wanna have a pointless battle over stupid shit. Thanks anyway. Nice drop though.
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Re: Eedee - "Second Person"

Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '12, 06:18

J.R. wrote:Nice! :laughing: I especially like the "I doubt jr will read this" line. Haha.

:y:

And no, I don't wanna have a pointless battle over stupid shit. Thanks anyway. Nice drop though.


Hehe, fair enough. Thanks for the look. :wave:
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