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Dear Eedee

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Dear Eedee

Postby Atone » Sep 22nd, '12, 07:04

(to the beat of Eminem - "Stan")

(Intro)
i bet this kid looks like Nico Santo's...
probably sittin at his mom's computer, wearin her panties and shit, fuck it
i'mma write em a letter

(Verse)
Dear Eedee, wherever you are
listen, i never act like a star
i just got ambitions, wishin to go far
on a mission, so listen, don't take this to hard
but you actin like a bitch, PMS got you scarred
takin pop shots in drops with lots of talk
this gots to stop you just askin for trouble
askin to tussle? you got class in ya hustle
i like that, so i'll fight back, to ignite raps
with a light that, shine's over your plight attacks
you came with a free, weather or not you aim it at me
a couple mentions cuz you itchen but you just a stranger to me
but i'm pickin up this hitchiker, cuz you aint a danger to me
i'll strangle ya, leave ya entangled and flee
you get dangled in a tree, dead with a paddy in ya mouth
bleedin from ya anus, like i'm yo daddy from the south
tell geno to insert swifty's pic, like yo that was pretty sick
we just playin around on the playground but you getting ripped
swfitly, so chill ya ego, go split a spiff, get lifted
til you feel like earth has shifted, then tell me my verse is shit kid

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Re: Dear Eedee

Postby Eedee » Sep 22nd, '12, 07:35

Alright haha, let's do this.
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