Short fast shit... Need some feedback.

[Recene]

You talkin' 'bout lotta crap when you really don't know shit.
You think that you been through it all, I been through it!
You really have no idea of what this is all about
So before you finish talking I advise you to shut your mouth
Many "you's", well I want her to know to whom this is for
All my feelings were erased when I closed that door
Damn, I'm not planning the future, this moment is a present
Everybody opened one except me, now really, who hasn't?

All these thoughts in my mind a voice is whispering
Most of the time I'm good but most of it I'm shivering
Living this life sometimes it seems to be beautiful
But not really, because sometimes shit's unusual
Many want success but it's not easy to get to
And when people get it, what's left to do?
Think of it as a mountain, think of it as a peak
Headquarters filled with people who never speak.

But I? Believe me that from my heart I will
Unless other people that got everything, I got will

[Recene]

Give someone else feedback first.

Oh come on Genoo!

[J.R.]

FFS feed Geno and Eedee's piece. All you have to do is click on his name

[Recene]

Why would we give you feedback if you refuse to?

Do it or I have to lock this.

Ok boss. I'll give feedback...

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