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bigray choker (Emulation Day 1)

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Re: bigray choker (Emulation Day 1)

Postby Eedee » Oct 4th, '12, 09:08

I liked how you rhymed Pakistan with Amsterdam, kept the whole geographical thing going. That was pretty neat.
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Postby PAINKILLƎR » Oct 4th, '12, 18:19

Eedee wrote:I liked how you rhymed Pakistan with Amsterdam, kept the whole geographical thing going. That was pretty neat.

This. :y: :y:
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