new rhyme i made (sorry for the way i wrote it. using ps3)

[righfield]

saw this guys rhyme viewtopic.php?f=24&t=147118 and i thought id post this similar verse oh and im going to have to split the verse into different post as ps3 has a text limit
despite what u will think this verse aint about u x it better girl its about two other girls/who like u convinced me cupids put a curse on me disheartening me when im my loved up self/i will refer 2 them both as 1 girl maybe i'll name her lucy,hell/the s.a.w.b. ripping off da mc slugs idea fuck it i'll leave u guessing whos these girls/u see fellas we were childhood sweethearts back then back in da day/but becos of unfortunate events out of my life she up and went away/years later on da interwebs facebook we got back in contact and she was going 2 court her/petrified at the idea of going 2 jail she let me in her life told me she was a abused daughter/so i became her sholder her listener though the tough days/when she felt like crap and her head was heading in a messed up state/

[righfield]

we made jokes though had a laugh it wasn't always doom and gloom/i just wanted 2 cheer her up i dont know about her but i never wanted to razor my rists up in a bathroom/ but she'd have mood shifts had a problem i'd arrange a date 2 meet up and she'd say lets do it/she could be a dam rude b***h not wanting 2 speak or meet with me always coming up with excuses/she'd cause me inner turmoil putting me down more and more making me feel self concious/why is it every girl i meet a massive twat and a girl of hurt/oh yh your gonna ignore me great add insult 2 injury after id been dumped by december tears girl/yh make me feel more alone after i just went and got my heart ripped out/yh go and remove my comment from your photo about u looking like the girl from the ring/god stop being so serious laugh at yourself relax take some puffs of some green/its not like i said anything offensive it was a joke a f***in joke/god listen to some snoop dog stop being so uptight and get up in smoke/

[BigBoss]

Why are you using ps3 to post it lol

[righfield]

oh yh dont bother with me anymore say im a depressed lonley git u shallow empty b***h thats low/how u turn every harsh thing u do on me you make wanna remove from my heart that old cupid arrow/u vain c**t how dare u 4 making me think that i did something wrong/reject my meeting arrangements screw meeting u i dont wanna know or i wouldnt be doing this song/im getting revenge on u like that purpose girl songs about u ill go and record them/make u look bloody stupid and horrible im putting on a great performance/ love apparently means everything so why am i being louserly inspired/lifes setting me up with the wrong girls so outta me spits fire/man strefan when u gonna learn dont be with girls whos names begin with caaa/those kickings ks and cs all thier gonna do is make your mood sh*ter/so thanks life i guess u did bad but i came out good bravo for your great performance/i didnt want this but your the invisable verson of jimmy savile im a victim of a rapers forced fuck/

[righfield]

Why are you using ps3 to post it lol

i havent got a proper computer

[righfield]

last lines of the verse
for onece cant i just have a caring girl and not someone whos vain whos mental/or im gonna give up on womankind all together and at the top of my lungs shout screw them all

[EmTV]

Wack

[righfield]

am i that bad i used multis everyline i flowed as good as i could i couldnt write my stuff fuckin pitch perfect grammer but like em he didnt do that ether geno i respect you am i that bad?

[righfield]

ok i'll take your advice and try not to make it look all over the place lol and also write under my text limit, gave that page a look too, you and that other guy killed it