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Animosity

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Animosity

Postby Enimee » Dec 23rd, '12, 19:47

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anti-hostility was never my steeze, id rather bring on the heat
the mother fuck en- to the mee, never pretendin to be any less then discreet
same type to get my page sniped by some fourth grade dykes
then turn around like, dont gas me up you cant afford grade a price
single syllable rhymin, cause im filled to the line with
ultimate designs that would break down a mind quick and its a bout time bitch
that yall find what im in--its a new category bro, of rappin sure but slow
cause slow is smooth and smooth is fast, so the facts should show
that rap has grown, past your old, prolific lyrical combinations
to which i have been given some serious contemplation
and come to the conclusion that yall are just furious cause im hatin
weary and so frustrated that yall really have just created
a semi-circle back to the fuckin basics, and thats just fucking great since
you have no trust in paid-sins, and i got no trust in pay-tience
bein a patient patiently waitin for my doctor to mis-diagnose my condition
cause i been leavin um gapin and sayin my rhymes are dope in composition
then contradictin when they here me get to spittin, like hes the best
little mic, in the back of the class crackin jokes never was a teachers pet
and if you need to guess, youd say he would take a fuckin leap to death
but instead he founds some leafs compressed and now hes raps deepest threat
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Re: Animosity

Postby Sam. » Dec 23rd, '12, 22:36

I love everything about this. Killed it. Compared to the drops that I remember from you, this seemed more polished. Keep it up.
[Rollefsen] - SajN retired, bitch got old, unlike Sams "ladies".
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Re: Animosity

Postby Enimee » Dec 24th, '12, 05:27

werd man thanks for the feeed
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