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Blind Cypher

Postby SliK » Mar 24th, '13, 11:50

LoF

This is a cypher that was written by 7 members including myself. Each member only had one line of the verse to write from and could only write 4 lines. It isn't the most cohesive piece but there are moments of greatness. I'm pretty happy with it.

The members and their order of appearance:
1. SliK
2. CrashBand
3. Mr.DGAF
4. Willy
5. Bigray
6. EvryOnesACrtc
7. Just Silver
8. SliK


Blind Cypher

It's a blind cypher, combine six writers
See who shines brighter... we're all sick minded
But who rhymes tighter?... this is SliK's triumph
I'm the lime lighter... and I spit fire
So hot, like it’s straight out the spin dryer
You’ll trip, then slip, like you hit my trip wire
Those similes were just so ludicrous and poor
Punch-line king? Or delusions of grandeur?
No sense in using your answer, a culture fueled by the danger
It's human nature, we shoot and maybe accuse the dude later
So choose your fate, ya live a happy life until it ends
Or you sacrifice your social stance and try extending it
the passive type that's tired of acting nice, I bend and twist
and one day I'mma snap in two but i'll make sure it's after you
I spend my afternoons sipping fixes for this attitude
a mix with gin a splash of doom, a little grin to match my mood
Bigray only one in this group with that I don’t give a fuck attitude
Nuttin’ for me to prove, sit back get seduced leave you lyrically abused,
Confused n keep gettin’ schooled, your heads all bruised as I execute
This tune to you fools, your basically screwed n should spit your bars nude
You'll git your heart chewed, cuz I'm a Great White---you're fish for shark food!/
My competitors? You won't find anymo' (Finding Nemo) like some Pixar cartoon/
Fuckin' ships are harpooned, when they try and attack me, with head on collision/
I got dead on precision and I'm set on a mission to become rich and successful/
Letting the tech blow if your disrespectful
better end up missing or catch a neck full
Like a necklace, better respect us, meaning my team
Three out the "metal beam" like straight constructioning
I've been watching the throne, time to take the fuckin' thing
Cos I spit that ill shit that makes your mother cringe
Ill fake another binge, detox and OD on methadone
You want it with SliK? Oh he's best left alone..
Last edited by SliK on Mar 25th, '13, 00:45, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Blind Cypher

Postby Just Silver » Mar 24th, '13, 13:53

this came out better than expected lol good stuff
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Re: Blind Cypher

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Mar 24th, '13, 16:07

Are you gonna list who is who? Slik, you've got really great rhyming on here. Loved your taking the throne line.
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Re: Blind Cypher

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Mar 24th, '13, 21:33

bigray wrote:If u go back to the lounge u can see the order...


Must we really make it that hard for our readers?
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Re: Blind Cypher

Postby SliK » Mar 25th, '13, 00:42

I don't think anyone who wasn't involved cares too much. It's no trouble for me to copy it in though so to make everyone happy ill do it.
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Re: Blind Cypher

Postby Willy » Mar 25th, '13, 02:46

Lawl @ me I meant 'splash of juice'.

Turned out pretty iil doh fellas
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Re: Blind Cypher

Postby SliK » Mar 25th, '13, 03:04

Willy wrote:Lawl @ me I meant 'splash of juice'.

Turned out pretty iil doh fellas

I think I prefer doom haha. I really liked your submission.
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Re: Blind Cypher

Postby Just Silver » Mar 25th, '13, 03:07

i just mainly wanted to keep flow i liked it
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Re: Blind Cypher

Postby SliK » Mar 25th, '13, 03:20

Just Silver wrote:i just mainly wanted to keep flow i liked it

Your bar length was half the size of the one I sent you haha.

I love how they get longer and longer than just snap back to regular size lol
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Re: Blind Cypher

Postby Just Silver » Mar 25th, '13, 03:26

i know lol hopefully it wasnt too awkward
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Re: Blind Cypher

Postby SliK » Mar 25th, '13, 03:27

You'd have to switch up your flow heaps to make this whole piece work in a rap, but reading it is fun.

I like it tbh.
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Re: Blind Cypher

Postby Just Silver » Mar 25th, '13, 03:31

yep its hard for me flowing long lines without pause or switch ups
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Re: Blind Cypher

Postby Mr.DGAF » Mar 25th, '13, 03:42

Willy, props man you actually kept the flow I was going for haha. Good shit.

Solid from everyone, this was a fun verse. I'm down if another comes along.
You'd be surprised...
How many truths you can hide in flows

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Re: Blind Cypher

Postby Willy » Mar 25th, '13, 04:52

SliK wrote:
Willy wrote:Lawl @ me I meant 'splash of juice'.

Turned out pretty iil doh fellas

I think I prefer doom haha. I really liked your submission.


Thanks homie - twas' fun to do and made my political science class a little more bearable. I was debating between doom and juice ... But gin and juice with only a splash of the latter would taste awful so I might have subconsciously avoided it.

Do you listen to Sadistik? I felt very emo/Sadistikey writing this, lol.

@MRDGAF *slow, withered old man voice* You know it, son.
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Re: Blind Cypher

Postby Eedee » Mar 25th, '13, 22:41

Should color-code this. It's a clusterfuck of fuck at the moment.
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