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Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

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Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

Postby Spyder » Mar 28th, '13, 03:02

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Just Silver
I’m gonna plain spazz out like looney toon Tazz mouth
And act out every scene seen on TV on this couch
In large amounts, the ounce decreases, sweet Jesus
I need somethin to put me at peace ‘til the week ceases
Peace like a fresh Wood in Stock Backwood get a cop
Back of my mind I unwind with what I might just get caught… with
Smoking up in my apartment, neighbor arguments of how strong it is
Like it aint my fault it is, plus I pay my rent, I should be mad at what’s spent
Stupid neighbor, get out before I chase ya or rape you like a Laker
And "leave" the scene like autumn rake ups and resume to get the day done
Its okay son, your fathers a gun, its been long time since you met
Let my finger do a full stretch and cock the hammer with a two-step
Bang Bang whose "next", like that old MTV show I’m H-BO your H to the obo
Overdose on dxm dyslexic music promos choose slow-mo
For my way of living never picked the way of Christians
I stay sinning while the devil grinning on my television

Hook |Spyder/Silver
Ill masterfully pai – wait! I’ll tactically hate like Poe in Furthermore
I’ll assault em, No! I’ll insult em, it’ll hurt em more.
More Sinister shit than Ethan Hawke I see em talkin
Our Syndicate would make Stephen Hawking believe in God kid.

Spyder
I got them limitless pills, any bout over in flashes
My prescription is filled and I’m ownin these faggots.
Visions to kill, champions gold controllin the match with
Sickening skill, like petroleum gas soakin some match tips.
I am, patrolling the map with my golden staff roamin the atlas
‘Til its Stone Henge's magic or the oceans my address.
Explosive gadgets, leavin limbs ripped and tapered
'Spyder' leave your ‘figure-ate’ like figure skaters.
Before a war, I take sorcerer's form and morph a sword
That’ll leave your aborted corpse found in an episode of Storage Wars.
I’m not a sort of savior, force of nature clear out your nomenclature
Warped behavior of Norman Bates orchestrating in a torture chamber.
My mortal ways not normal, pains my playful portrait painted
pokin' pagans porous faces ‘til their bloods pourin on the pavement.
Its come down to me vs myself, I’ll let the pen settle this
Ghost writing from a ouija board with death sentences.

Hook |Spyder/Silver
Ill masterfully pai – wait! I’ll tactically hate like Poe in Furthermore
I’ll assault em, No! I’ll insult em, it’ll hurt em more.
More Sinister shit than Ethan Hawke I see em talkin
Our Syndicate would make Stephen Hawking believe in God kid.
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

Postby Just Silver » Mar 28th, '13, 03:21

came out sick i like it better than last
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

Postby Spyder » Mar 28th, '13, 03:23

yeah that last one i think we did a little too much drugs...

this seems to be the right amount :laughing:
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

Postby Just Silver » Mar 28th, '13, 03:27

lol it does seem so even though i was fucked up :o
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

Postby Spyder » Mar 28th, '13, 04:21

Thanks for the feed and checkin it man
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

Postby EvryOnesACrtc » Mar 29th, '13, 00:11

This was really great stuff by the both of you.

Just Silver, I had a fun time reading yours. The words you chose just made everything flow so nice. These were my favorite lines from you cuz they were so clever:

Bang Bang whose "next", like that old MTV show I’m H-BO your H to the obo

Stupid neighbor, get out before I chase ya or rape you like a Laker
ahha lotta people forget about that ever happening with Kobe^^

Spyder, you've got this metaphor/punchline stuff pretty much mastered. You make it seem like it's easy, but verses like these take time to construct. I was kinda glad you were experimenting with different topics though, as of late, but you're back at it with the same old. I'd love to see you stretch your content cuz I know you're capable of more.

Dat chorus doe. Damn. It was kinda weird, but I like it.

Overall, I think Spyder took this one. Great job. I really don't have much in-depth stuff to say. I wish stuff like this was mainstream rap.
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

Postby Just Silver » Mar 29th, '13, 00:18

Thanks for the feed guy i was quite UN sober when i wrote this I'm happy how it came out
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

Postby Spyder » Mar 29th, '13, 02:21

Word man my group shit is a lot different than my solo shit.

Our next track is gonna be serious, and my upcoming audio EP will be 90% topical/serious

Thanks for the feed man
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

Postby CanadaPure » Mar 29th, '13, 03:34

At first I was skeptical of the Sinister Syndicate idea, but I actually really enjoyed this. Just Silver, you've improved a lot and Spyder has always been good. So it was a fun read.
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

Postby Spyder » Mar 29th, '13, 03:45

Thanks fam, why were you skeptical? We made a nice team in the ego tourney
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

Postby CanadaPure » Mar 29th, '13, 03:49

Spyder wrote:Thanks fam, why were you skeptical? We made a nice team in the ego tourney


When you guys first got together I felt like Just Silver would get slaughtered by you on every song, because he was still just starting to learn. He's fit with you much better than I expected, and has made lots of improvement that has surprised me. So it's worked out better than I thought it would have originally.

It just seems like you guys have fun writing shit, and that's cool.
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

Postby Just Silver » Mar 29th, '13, 03:55

Thanks guy i cant wait for the serious project
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

Postby Spyder » Mar 29th, '13, 04:49

Word man, this was started on fun really. We just chill and don't take each other too serious (know what I mean)
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

Postby CanadaPure » Mar 29th, '13, 04:54

Spyder wrote:Word man, this was started on fun really. We just chill and don't take each other too serious (know what I mean)


Yeah I got you. Anyway, keep it up it's good shit.
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Re: Sinister Syndicate - Assault by Insult

Postby Francesco » Apr 12th, '13, 00:19

I love them multies... shit is good overall & esp. 'cuz it's in a full song format kinda. :y:
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