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MBK [7]

Postby J.R. » Apr 3rd, '13, 21:08

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[Verse 1]
Black Hair, with pale skin to match mine,
everything about you is wonderful, not just the last line,
that rhymes, it goes together like one-two,
and I'm hopeless lover, but I think I love you.
but do you feel the same, or are you just being friendly?
I'm fully of envy, end me cause this doesn't make sense see,
we both have our lovers to hold onto, would I put her above you, or drop you?
Mind tellin me "stop dude" but my hear is too caught to.
if you were music, I wouldn't have paused you, wish this was a lock boo,
because now I can't block you, we're into the same misfit shit,
wish you hadn't giggled and agreed when I said "I hate that BITCH."
it would've never progressed to a mess with two spots in my chest,
one filled but the other one empty, a hole is left,
at best, now I've gotta choose but it seems like you or I lose,
wish I could tell someone but labelers would brand me, jesus dude, I'm confused..
The thoughts..the feelings, they ooze, just remember, I'm in love with..you two?

[Chorus]
Caught in a trap, in love with a few,
taking me back, who do I choose?
Who do I grab?
Who do I grab?

[verse 2]
Dear M, I left you, cause you were moving,
now i'm losing , you choosin my friends to flirt with,
and it hurts bitch, which by the way, I threw in another girl,
now i'm really in a daze, a whirl, maybe I need a break,
from this daily chasin girls craze.. maybe its a phase,
praize the lord if I'm saved from all this haze,
and hey, maybe I need to take it day by day.
cause I'm fallin off my game, runnin outta things to say.
This shit is crazy, and I'm feelinn so fuckin fake.
full of hate for M, and I don't know who to date, shit,
get me a cape, cause I'm about to fly away bitch,
if my body's mostly water, please somebody drain it,
I hate this, the pain gets amplified, takes a man not to cry.
Why oh why, does it get ramped up to the sky?
uncover these deceitful lies, let the weakness die!
and tell me who I need to find.

[Chorus]
Caught in a trap, in love with a few,
taking me back, who do I choose?
Who do I grab?
Who do I grab?
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