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Bigray - The Day After (Shots Fired)

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Re: Bigray - The Day After (Shots Fired)

Postby Atone » Apr 17th, '13, 00:52

Damn, i'm not relevant no more, no shots at me, i'm sad

this was actually weird to read, i felt like i was in school again reading a friends weird journal writtin in rhymes, or, listening to a immature Eminem unreleased slim shady era song that was never meant to be heard

some parts were good, other parts were weird, left me with the queestion...wtf is wrong with you? lol

you did alright tho, if your plan was to be weird and diss people i guess, maybe this isn't a serious track,
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Re: Bigray - The Day After (Shots Fired)

Postby Just Silver » Apr 17th, '13, 00:59

feel like its a piece to try to spark somethin but is alot wackier than serious
shouldve went a little more personal im bad at this lol since ive never gotten to know alot of TRians personally

but overall a fun read seemed like a rushed piece
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Re: Bigray - The Day After (Shots Fired)

Postby Eedee » Apr 17th, '13, 05:13

You bit a faggot's dick off?

What does that make you?
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Re: Bigray - The Day After (Shots Fired)

Postby Eedee » Apr 18th, '13, 01:23

Your "personals" were incorrect/didn't make sense anyway lol
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Re: Bigray - The Day After (Shots Fired)

Postby CanadaPure » Apr 18th, '13, 02:30

What the fuck is goin' on here?
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Re: Bigray - The Day After (Shots Fired)

Postby Eedee » Apr 18th, '13, 02:53

He's mad or something.
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Re: Bigray - The Day After (Shots Fired)

Postby CanadaPure » Apr 18th, '13, 03:03

It was interesting to read, but you were all over the place this time bigray.
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Re: Bigray - The Day After (Shots Fired)

Postby Trimss » Apr 18th, '13, 21:53

That biting a dick line is kinda weird Bigray. lol
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Re: Bigray - The Day After (Shots Fired)

Postby DƎRDYPK » Apr 18th, '13, 22:06

but why did you bite another dude's dick?
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