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Bigray - Lets do this

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Re: Bigray - Lets do this

Postby Just Silver » Apr 20th, '13, 04:45

its straight for a keystyle sometimes it feels like your using the right words and just placing them too
quick in the rhyming this can make a flow interesting though and it did at points overall id say an experimental piece but decent
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