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Art Of Defeat

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Art Of Defeat

Postby Just Silver » Jul 25th, '13, 15:27

feed- snake jacks friendly awful features*cant copy n paste

Just messin around before i have to get back to life problems
practice time :coffee:


Couldnt bother to Poppa-Gino for a piece of the pie
Especially during this whole week in my life
Im not even a battler are you fuckin proud now
Found out my real name and wears a crown
Person-ally for me personals to a beat
Is too time consuming especially in the streets
Where i could end to be with less food to eat
But congrats man i even have a dis-ability
Autism but you oughta listen guy its killin me
I dont have time for Googling and Twitter beef
But ill approve your diss to me im sorta history
Shit was like if Jayz never dissed back
Even though when he did people thought it was wack
im crazy for even the thought of this track
but sorry i had to write with all these weights on my back
Dissed last night plus the problems at home
Multiplied by three yet somehow i keep goin
The money,the drugs ,the time of the moment
I sink like dishes and soap shit try to stay focused
Thinking how ill comeback from the whole bit
But fuck that i dont even have battle wits yet
and thats a yet so you know ill be back
Give ben 10 a tech n9ne with as many holes as his posts
Ill leave the whole scene fuck it kill myself and turn ghost
Last edited by Just Silver on Jul 28th, '13, 03:05, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Art of defeat

Postby Just Silver » Jul 27th, '13, 14:34

bored af bump
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Re: Art Of Defeat

Postby Just Silver » Jul 31st, '13, 15:32

last bump then starting new piece :y:
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Re: Art Of Defeat

Postby Eedee » Aug 1st, '13, 12:10

Lol this was fun. I loved the beginning end rhyme. Felt good to say.

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Re: Art Of Defeat

Postby Just Silver » Aug 1st, '13, 12:13

thanks guy this was slept on so long lol

hopefully TRench Coats gets feed later today :y:
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Postby Eedee » Aug 1st, '13, 12:19

Yeah I sure hope so haha
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