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CanadaPure - Controllefsen (Rolly Response)

Postby CanadaPure » Aug 17th, '13, 09:36

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=162825#p2275866
Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g8eCPu29vEc

---NameDroppingAssMotherFucker---

Rolly, I'm gonna need you to try and turn that massive thirst down,
Because you're going to be knocked out black in the first round,
So keep hittin' those Ls, like King Lance when he's lickin' himself,
While fantasizing about his favorite rapper's fictional sales,
While their CDs sit on his shelf, Rolly's lines just wont pin me,
I look forward to seeing you get beat down by Zolt Trimssy,
Just Silver, don't be acting all straight, if I'd have asked,
I bet you'd say yes to a homoerotic joke, inside your ass,
Gay guys? Nah, you just feel more left behind than the eighth time,
You repeated fifth grade, I think that was in 2008, right?
Rol', you know you're having a bad day when you get ethered by bigray,
Then Pain got you too, and I don't think either were mistakes,
Just wait, Creative Writing is more of a disgrace lately,
Than BasedShady acting like hes part of another race, baby,
You're planning to name drop, but you aimed at the same spot,
You're standing in, great shot, now your brain just exclaims "stop!"
But he's sprayin' the flames hot, "New World Order" can suck my dick,
And I'll bust my shit quicker than our boy Sam. can touch my kid,
So get under cover quick, and get this dog a better bone,
Because he just wore his off trying to fuck photos of Emma stone,
And you're fucking crazy if you think we ain't coming for blood,
Rolly claimed that this is war, but his tank's stuck in the mud,
Fuck, that's enough, I laughed at the title "TR-Dead",
Because your lines are like Just Silvers... Re-tar-ded.


#RIPRolly #TRCrayCray
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Re: CanadaPure - Controllefsen (Rolly Response)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 17th, '13, 09:46

:laughing: you already know how I feel about this.

So keep hittin' those Ls, like King Lance when he's lickin' himself,
While fantasizing about his favorite rapper's fictional sales,
While their CDs sit on his shelf, Rolly's lines just wont pin me,
I look forward to seeing you get beat down by Zolt Trimssy,
Just Silver, don't be acting all straight, if I'd have asked,
I bet you'd say yes to a homoerotic joke, inside your ass,
Gay guys? Nah, you just feel more left behind than the eighth time,
You repeated fifth grade, I think that was in 2008, right?


This and the Sam line are my favourites. whew

Great drop.
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Re: CanadaPure - Controllefsen (Rolly Response)

Postby CanadaPure » Aug 17th, '13, 18:08

Thanks guys, much <3
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Re: CanadaPure - Controllefsen (Rolly Response)

Postby CanadaPure » Aug 17th, '13, 18:29

bigray wrote:This came out of no where CP, I enjoyed reading this drop, it had some pretty funny and me laughing throughout the verse.

This cracked me up big time

So keep hittin' those Ls, like King Lance when he's lickin' himself,
While fantasizing about his favorite rapper's fictional sales,


Lmao I was really bored last night, so I figured what the hell! I'm gonna jump in. :laughing:
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Re: CanadaPure - Controllefsen (Rolly Response)

Postby Snakebeast » Aug 18th, '13, 05:16

This shit is awesome as FUCK. I'm disappointed I didn't get a name drop :( I'll diss you either way doe.

"I look forward to seeing you get beat down by Zolt Trimssy,"

:laughing:

Rhyming is great and pretty natural. How do you do people do this shit :confusion:

"Fuck, that's enough, I laughed at the title "TR-Dead",
Because your lines are like Just Silvers... Re-tar-ded.
"


I agree with this statement 100%.












































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