Trimss - Control response (shots fired!)

[Trimss]

This was a quickie. Saw some funny shots, props to Bigray my homie, Rollefsen, Eedee (you didn't diss me but got dissed on "your track, you my buddy too nothing personal) and Just Silver

Verse 1:

Undeniably I'm the best, I'll choke this fag
with nicotine in his chest, put my style to the test
I cause human combustions deaths when I be busting raps,
A dumb gorilla who talks like a slow wigga
Yeah, lifting is not bad, Bigray still you're fake
I wish you got smarter for every dumb L/dumbbell you take
I was sitting, didn't want to get involved in this shit
but my name got thrown around like Eedee's bitch
Acting like he is sick, i'll promote you my help is needed six,
mixtapes five albums with nine views on each of it
and your covert art? no one is seeing it
I'm the kind of guy it's hard not to hate, I'll smack your jaw so hard
it'll make Demaz articulate
Just Silver loves 9 to 5's, you know he looks for it
I mean it's his range of age for the chicks he's screwing shit
or worse, he's probably picking up girls at pre-school and shit
With glasses, a trench coat, some candies this guy's a mind fuck!
So you're taking your neighbour's garbage out for five bucks?
That's some bad luck shit don't you have a bit of pride whut?!
And I guess they see me rolling, and they hate my power
but that's cuz I'm rolling on Rollefsen's grave's flowers
the one I buried him in, it's over it's time for departure
You know I'm hard sir, I raped him so hard with this mic
Whoever will get it out of his ass will be crowned king arthur

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[Just Silver]

real good shit guy but it was 10 bucks lol

[Trimss]

SHIT I knew I got it wrong. I was sure it was ten smh. Thanks bro

[Mr.DGAF]

SHOTS

[PAINKILLƎR]

Haha some lethal shit here brother, loved the dumbbell line awesome man. You also went at silver pretty hard lmao hilarious.

One thing though, some lines you have are like way longer than the others, I see like in some you have words you don't really need crammed up and that fucks with the flow nahmean? Other than that this was a fun and dope read. Good drop brother.

[SajN]

It was a good drop. I think you had some basic rhymes, though. Especially in the beginning, but it got better afterwards.

I lol'd at the Demaz line. and I thought the line about Eedee's albums/mixtapes was pretty good

[Francesco]

I'm the kind of guy it's hard not to hate, I'll smack your jaw so hard
it'll make Demaz articulate

Ouch...

[Trimss]

Thanks for feeding this, guys.

That's what I was trying to do, I was trying to write at least ONE quotable, one part that will stick out for every guy I dissed.

[Trimss]

Demaz is a cool guy lol this line was smooth, that's it. I have him on my facebook and he's honestly improving as a producer and even as a rapper so it's all good. I don't think he'd be offended.

[Francesco]

Poor Demaz though, guy gets thrown under the bus every other drop lmao

Demaz is a cool guy lol this line was smooth, that's it. I have him on my facebook and he's honestly improving as a producer and even as a rapper so it's all good. I don't think he'd be offended.

I think he's cool too... I hope he won't feel bad about it 'cuz it was a friendly diss & all that.

Thanks for feeding this, guys.

Anytime little homie.