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Hage - conTROL II ( NAMES DROPPED )

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Re: Hage - conTROL II ( NAMES DROPPED )

Postby Just Silver » Aug 19th, '13, 00:04

good shit lol loved the structure of the 3 different short verses
the flow was iffy though sometimes i couldnt find rhythm and started sounding too natural lol although it can be a good thing
"social and economic etc line" was one where i found this for example
i dont know who kiki is though

Lovin this activity

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Re: Hage - conTROL II ( NAMES DROPPED )

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 19th, '13, 00:22

That ransom line was sick as fuck.

Was a fun read. This activity is great.
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