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Painkiller & Rolly - Takeover (SO MANY NAME DROPS, MY GOD)

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 19th, '13, 01:06

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Lof

HIT EM UP, HIT EM UP!

Rolly
Painkiller

Oh no, fucking hell, Rollys back again,
Hide yo’ kids, hide yo’ wives, oh shit he brought a friend,
Its Pain, (oh no), too much to apprehend,
We’ll leave you all in agony until the bitter end.
CW is back, yeah, y’all can thank me later,
I’m not an imitator; I’m a fucking alligator,
I won’t bite you, biting’s fucking gay,
I’m not like that faggot mononym in any fucking way,
Don’t panic now, brother, I’m not gonna fight you,
This is nothing compared to what I’ll do if I don’t become a light blue,
Get it SajN? You better make me a fucking Vet soon,
Or imma have to break in to your lacking private jet, goon,
And just fly away, fly all the way to Bay State,
Just so I can smack a jobless faggot in the face with a gold plate.
I’m underrated as fuck, I’m icing the puck,
When I dropped TRDead, CW went amok,
Come at me, I’ll duck, you fucking canuck,
Yeah CP, I’m talking to you, now who else will get struck?
How about that other Canafag, the pill poppin bigray.
Ill just go easy and say “Fuck you, but have a nice day”
Fucking Notalius, almost forgot about you, sister,
I popped you so easy last time - Water blister,
Zolt Trimssy, I can’t believe you followed through
I’m rising from my grave, bitch, your mother should’ve swallowed you
Now crown me King Arthur, I murder all the competition,
This is Rolly 2.0, and killing is my fucking mission.
I’m going forward, Eedee, better watch your fucking mouth, son
Diss my Emma Stone again and get your fucking life done,
I resurrected CW, I’m the true second coming,
After Pain ends this shit, I swear you’ll all be running.


[Hookx2]
This is the takeover...


First I gotta take it back to the basics, let me school in this business
Fuck your hype im the greatness, you're It's witness
Not witless, got the greatest on my hitlist
After this done we'll see who's nuts are the biggest
Not long ago most of y'all had my balls in y'all jaws
Then shit gets sour and egos are the cause
I hear you slik, just hope your fav cum dumpster isn't your cousin or sister
Incest will have your offsprings lookin' disfigured and blistered
Hope your shit is slick though, wouldn't wanna hurt your fam,
Or you'd be raising Slim Cary soon, then tell me, was it worth it man?
I'll extract venom from punches of a deadly Spyder and arm it
Use it on kids who try to get at girls through the web, like Charlotte
That's the same sucker claiming my shit was forced
Kill 'em, it's never enough when the bodies hit the floors
Give 'em more, brothers be actin' shady when he ain't even based, what?
Son you've been trippin' lately, homie just lace up
Have your face cut if you start frontin' like 'Cesco
Hit that wigga up, you don't know shit about the west coast
Royalty? I'll take shit on your throne, king lance
Snatch his crown make it my own, now sing, dance
My personal jester, fuck all those losers who've been lost
Get the hammer when they act as sheep like bigboss
Don't feel bad when I don't pour out liquor for you vijilance
It's just that I know you're not worth the 3 dollars and 50 cents
Cuz you find out people talk behind your back like python
Dirtyass snakes then come back looking for a shoulder to cry on
Bigray do everybody a favour and lay off of them steroids
Every time anyone disagrees with you, you get a bad case of the hemorrhoids
and silver the more you bum around the dumber your dome gets
Keep it up and I bet you're soon to be homeless
Call my verse phone sex, it's only a tease
Though you're probably mad, keep your pussies at ease


[Hookx2]

[Outro]
And to think I held back on this
Y'all gon' be catching feelings, while we be catching bodies...

Was gonna come at kill you too, but that dude is on the edge
Don't want somebodies suicide weighing on my conscience haha...

Bitches
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Re: Painkiller & Rolly - Takeover (SO MANY NAME DROPS, MY GO

Postby LIL_B » Aug 19th, '13, 01:13

amazing
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Re: Painkiller & Rolly - Takeover (SO MANY NAME DROPS, MY GO

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 19th, '13, 01:14

LIL_B wrote:amazing
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Re: Painkiller & Rolly - Takeover (SO MANY NAME DROPS, MY GO

Postby LIL_B » Aug 19th, '13, 01:18

PAINKILLƎR wrote:
LIL_B wrote:trash

blu ghostwrote my shit thats probably why, I'll let him know though.

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Re: Painkiller & Rolly - Takeover (SO MANY NAME DROPS, MY GO

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 19th, '13, 01:20

mononym wrote:
LIL_B wrote:trash


whew

kinda hoped Pain will diss me but now i guess i'll have to ether Rolly twice Image

i like that vijilance line pain, the whole piece flowed elegantly and believe it or not you two actually have good chemistry mixed here, even though the main focus was the name dropping it all felt natural unlike Game's discography

but don't worry it's gonna be over real soon rolly real soon

Thanks bruh, I appreciate the words
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Re: Painkiller & Rolly - Takeover (SO MANY NAME DROPS, MY GO

Postby Eedee » Aug 19th, '13, 01:27

Lol Pain that was a dope drop. You had some great lines in there.

I hear you slik, just hope your fav cum dumpster isn't your cousin or sister
Incest will have your offsprings lookin' disfigured and blistered
Hope your shit is slick though, wouldn't wanna hurt your fam,
Or you'd be raising Slim Cary soon, then tell me, was it worth it man?
I'll extract venom from punches of a deadly Spyder and arm it
Use it on kids who try to get at girls through the web, like Charlotte


I liked the wordplay here as well as the punchlines. I also like how you tied in name drops/disses to SliK and Slim Cary with the same thought lol, nice nice.

Good work, brother. :y:
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Re: Painkiller & Rolly - Takeover (SO MANY NAME DROPS, MY GO

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 19th, '13, 01:33

Eedee wrote:Lol Pain that was a dope drop. You had some great lines in there.

I hear you slik, just hope your fav cum dumpster isn't your cousin or sister
Incest will have your offsprings lookin' disfigured and blistered
Hope your shit is slick though, wouldn't wanna hurt your fam,
Or you'd be raising Slim Cary soon, then tell me, was it worth it man?
I'll extract venom from punches of a deadly Spyder and arm it
Use it on kids who try to get at girls through the web, like Charlotte


I liked the wordplay here as well as the punchlines. I also like how you tied in name drops/disses to SliK and Slim Cary with the same thought lol, nice nice.

Good work, brother. :y:

Haha thank you brother really glad you think so. That last part with the spider play is aimed at never enough. I want to know what he thinks about thàt.

:shifty:

Based brother I see you. :D
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Re: Painkiller & Rolly - Takeover (SO MANY NAME DROPS, MY GO

Postby Notalius » Aug 19th, '13, 01:59

sister ? bitch please .. ya'll ain't wanna miss my repsonse then
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Re: Painkiller & Rolly - Takeover (SO MANY NAME DROPS, MY GO

Postby Kill You » Aug 19th, '13, 02:15

You murdered me, touche.
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Re: Painkiller & Rolly - Takeover (SO MANY NAME DROPS, MY GO

Postby Just Silver » Aug 19th, '13, 02:30

good stuff roll is doin crzy for a beginner with wordplay and some nice flows

There were alot of name drops and i always like to see the lines about me lol i liked rollys cause the gold/silver wordplay

even shots at vjillance lol that 3.50$ alcohol line was one of my favorites :y:

overall the control thing is gettin a little stale but as long as c.w is up TR is alive again lol at least for us writers
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Re: Painkiller & Rolly - Takeover (SO MANY NAME DROPS, MY GO

Postby Never_Enough » Aug 19th, '13, 14:14

These lyrics are great, I love the first four Rolly lines, and it's a tie between you two for me, but y'all should stop dissing random people, you'll get killed.
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Re: Painkiller & Rolly - Takeover (SO MANY NAME DROPS, MY GO

Postby Francesco » Aug 25th, '13, 23:56

Good drop from both of you...
Good mention & a great line actually... just that you're the one who doesn't know shit about the West Coast.
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Re: Painkiller & Rolly - Takeover (SO MANY NAME DROPS, MY GO

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 26th, '13, 00:14

I proved your dumbass wrong, what are you even talking about. I was born and raised in LA. You're just a ignorant foreigner who visits from time to time.
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Re: Painkiller & Rolly - Takeover (SO MANY NAME DROPS, MY GO

Postby Francesco » Aug 26th, '13, 00:23

PAINKILLƎR wrote:I proved your dumbass wrong, what are you even talking about. I was born and raised in LA. You're just a ignorant foreigner who visits from time to time.


:laughing: Proved me wrong?
By saying 3 idiotic things in the same thread...

1. ''Ice Cube keeps embarrassing LA''
2.''Xzibit is from Ice Cube generation of rappers''
3. Pac is a ''West coaster''

That's beyond idiotic actually... I can't even describe it.
You can't even add more shit to a single thread... by the way the most unique thing about 2Pac was he was a New Yorker who went & took over the West Coast... at the end of the day a guy who was born & raised in NY & had his first rap name MC New York can't be a ''West coaster''.
Keep proving me wrong by popping nonsense... it really looks like I'm the one who doesn't know shit about the West Coast.
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Re: Painkiller & Rolly - Takeover (SO MANY NAME DROPS, MY GO

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 26th, '13, 00:33

I stand by ice cube embarrassing LA because he is, his music now is the epitome of shit.

Anyway I never said X was the same generation as cube, even though they both started their solo careers in the 90s so technically they made music in the same "generation" imbecile.

Thirdly, do you want me to revive that thread where you said Pac will go forever be from the east coast then in then said he would forever be a west coaster and I exposed your dumbass even Spyder witnessed that shit.
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