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CanadaPure - Replied 2 III

Postby CanadaPure » Aug 19th, '13, 04:17

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=162879&p=2278152#p2278152
Beat: https://soundcloud.com/cpsthirteenvds/b ... strumental

:laughing: This beef fuck around shit is so amusing ---

Snake, I'd diss you but when it dropped, stopped your heart bitch,
Then bigray'll climb inside and try to hot box your carcass,
Rapping about cocks and hardness while calling all of us gay,
'Til you wake up crawling out of bed bawling 'cause you fucked Ray,
Sad I didn't diss you? Welcome to wrist slitter kids anonymous,
Slim Cary's your roommate, you're bitch, bitter, and synonymous
To a faggot, but that's enough of the dirty shit, it's just jokes,
But you can try to suck on roughly thirty dicks and just choke,'
Like Bigray on his smoke, it didnt take a single thought in my brain,
To laugh when I saw it again, Rollefsen got bodied by Pain,
Pray to god and to SajNtan that I don't finish what you started,
You're an easy target, you think you can win it? you're retarded,
But I already covered that in my first response to TR-Dead
Ego hasn't even jumped on yet, you don't want to see our depth,
Throw a baby on a flambe, skull-fuck Ariana Grand-eh,
Hage asked me to jump in, but you just dared me on the wrong day,
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Re: CanadaPure - Replied 2 III

Postby PAINKILLƎR » Aug 19th, '13, 04:34

Lmao this is fucking gold. The brother ray got bodied hard. That Ariana shit with Hage lmao beautiful. The rhyming was great, smooth, always consistent.

Cary got it twice today too haha nice. Great drop!
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Re: CanadaPure - Replied 2 III

Postby CanadaPure » Aug 19th, '13, 04:35

Tbh, I wasn't even dissing Ray lmao. I just was rolling with that BigGay shit from a while ago :laughing:
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Re: CanadaPure - Replied 2 III

Postby CanadaPure » Aug 19th, '13, 06:17

Menzo wrote::laughing:

This was great. Your rhyming and flow was spot on, this was my favourite portion:

"Rapping about cocks and hardness while calling all of us gay,
'Til you wake up crawling out of bed bawling 'cause you fucked Ray,
Sad I didn't diss you? Welcome to wrist slitter kids anonymous,
Slim Cary's your roommate, you're bitch, bitter, and synonymous
To a faggot, but that's enough of the dirty shit, it's just jokes,
But you can try to suck on roughly thirty dicks and just choke,'
Like Bigray on his smoke, it didnt take a single thought in my brain,
To laugh when I saw it again, Rollefsen got bodied by Pain"

WHEW!


Lud u Menzo <3

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If you'd have replied to my other shots you would have got mentioned bb.
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Re: CanadaPure - Replied 2 III

Postby Bugs » Aug 19th, '13, 08:24

Great stuff you are truly becoming an incredible poet.
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Cause that ain't good enough you expect me to fold myself in half till I snap
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