they've been warned

[Ka0t1c]

http://forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=162915 LOF

say no more, aint playin your games, you whore
kaotic, what are you waitin for, aim to score
don't stay indoors with the same ol chores because you'll go insane
so change your course and remain to enforce
you've trained in terrain where there's wars
sustain the power you've gained and record
don't bow or obey to their lords
maintain, you gotta hang onto your sword
devour the prey, cowards, mayhem's in store, allow me to claim my rewards
bounce your way up the court, thousands of pains you'll absorb
put blood stains on the porch plus guts, brains and gore
watch it rain as gallons pour, today is ours and not yours
count the stars, sound the horns, alarm the boys, start the encore
you've been forewarned

[Eedee]

I liked the schemes and how they transitioned from bar to bar.

Not much else to critique haha, it's just your everyday rap verse, ya know? Solid piece.

[Ka0t1c]

cool, i'm still working on this piece right now

[Eedee]

Cool. Just tell me when you edit it with the final version and I'll have a look.

edit: I like it better now lol