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Just Silver Feat. SajN & Hesky - Our Future (Never Know)

Postby SajN » Sep 5th, '13, 23:01

Just Silver LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=162909&p=2307756#p2307756
SajN LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=162909
Hesky LOF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=163278

Beat: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dz2cBkCP0Bg

(my verse wasn't really done to the beat... oh well)


[Verse 1 – Just Silver]

We all got bars some of them are made of steel
I shoulda found a job why you think im takin pills
I cant even take those now the gates closed down
Im locked up i fucked up and let my soul drown
Never been this depressed or stressed before
Used to laugh at Facebook whores and the message board
Now all of them are doing better than me repetitively
If i just got that job and stopped me the medicine fiend
But i never ceased no college degrees
So im where i oughta be basedshady keeps callin me
As if he sponsored me but just trolls and laughs constantly
I shouldve controlled my past and went on to other things
I dont even care what my mother thinks
my life sentence is my summary live uncomfortably
Rewind my sentence cause a life is worth discovery
Id do it all differently if i had another week fuck it im me



[Chorus – Just Silver]

So what the fucks the future got in for you
Are you gonna make it or turn to a criminal
Some will succeed yet others might shoot ya
We may really never know our future

Its time to pick a path could be a road to riches
Yea we live it fast wonder what the futures hidden
If we look in the past we may be able to glimpse it
I think i picture it, can you picture this?



[Verse 2 – SajN]

20 years from now, I’ll be old and gray
With no hair on my head, but it’s all okay
Because I’ll forget that shit while I snort cocaine
when I hit that point in life that is nothing short of pain
There will be no SajN, just me trying to clean my mess
a bad job, nagging wife and kids while I try to be my best
not able to sleep with stress, don’t wanna live that lie
Wanna be able to express myself and ease that life
By turning into a bad guy during midlife crisis
See, I don’t even care who this knife might hit
I might just go and stab this wife I’ll get
if she nags and acts like she’s always right. Right, bitch??
I’m not a psychic, but that’s how her life will be ended
Wait… It won’t happen, cuz I just remembered…
Telling this story is not even worth it
Because my disease will kill me before I’m 40



[Chorus – Just Silver]

So what the fucks the future got in for you
Are you gonna make it or turn to a criminal
Some will succeed yet others might shoot ya
We may really never know our future

Its time to pick a path could be a road to riches
Yea we live it fast wonder what the futures hidden
If we look in the past we may be able to glimpse it
I think i picture it, can you picture this?



[Verse 3 – Hesky]

Before I'm thirty I'd like to have lots of cash
Getting stopped by paparazzi but I've got to dash
Maybe lash out at a few of 'em like Justin Bieber
Grow to be the person you can't put your trust in either
Because, I might start wildin' out at any second
Loose cannon like a villain in a spaghetti western
Leave 'em stressing with my antics and outbursts
When shit hits the fan and then the fan shits it out worse
Running to the papers blowing things out of proportion
When they were in my pants blowing things out of proportion!
I'm single handedly bringing the news the the masses
Now these asses got me singing the blues -
& it's tragic; my career's going off the rails
This wild ride finally ends and it stops in jail
Asking my manager "Please tell me that you've got the bail?"
But I forgot last week I spent it all on rocks and bail
Full extent not to scale, my mind's blurry as well
and you'll be damned if you think that I'm sharing a cell!
I'm the Heskman! I used to be on top of the world
But now I'm just a has-been, forgotten, man it's rotten in this world...



[Chorus – Just Silver]

So what the fucks the future got in for you
Are you gonna make it or turn to a criminal
Some will succeed yet others might shoot ya
We may really never know our future

Its time to pick a path could be a road to riches
Yea we live it fast wonder what the futures hidden
If we look in the past we may be able to glimpse it
I think i picture it, can you picture this?
! Is He Nuts? No, He's InSajN !
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Re: Just Silver Feat. SajN & Hesky - Our Future (Never Know)

Postby SajN » Sep 5th, '13, 23:41

Lol, I read through your part several times, but not even I catched it. Fixed.


Yeah, it's cool
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Re: Just Silver Feat. SajN & Hesky - Our Future (Never Know)

Postby Just Silver » Sep 5th, '13, 23:47

the two hooks actually pretty much worked on this one
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Re: Just Silver Feat. SajN & Hesky - Our Future (Never Know)

Postby SajN » Sep 5th, '13, 23:47

Yeah. I like that it ends with a question
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Re: Just Silver Feat. SajN & Hesky - Our Future (Never Know)

Postby Ka0t1c » Sep 5th, '13, 23:55

"I'm single handedly bringing the news the the masses" is that a stutter, jk


Maybe lash out at a few of 'em like Justin Bieber
Grow to be the person you can't put your trust in either

pretty cool line also got rhyme at end, nicely done

good collab, just silver's verse i enjoyed the most
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Just Silver Feat. SajN & Hesky - Our Future (Never Know)

Postby LIL_B » Sep 6th, '13, 05:20

Basedshady wrote:Just Silver got struggle bars.

Basedshady definitely laughing though.
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Re: Just Silver Feat. SajN & Hesky - Our Future (Never Know)

Postby Just Silver » Sep 6th, '13, 13:10

i was waiting for BS lol
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Re: Just Silver Feat. SajN & Hesky - Our Future (Never Know)

Postby Eedee » Sep 7th, '13, 03:31

JS - You had some good lines, man. I see the improvement! At times, your rhymes (like on the "college degree") part, the syllables were so close to being a match, but they did sound cool out loud though, despite not being a true multi.

SajN - Puttin' in work haha. This was good shit, dawg. Not much else to say, you have the grasp of flowing and rhyming.

Hesky - I love the font color tbh. I don't know why, just makes me happy. Nice verse, I think I might like this one the most, but it's a collab, not a competition.

Good shit fellas. :y:
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Re: Just Silver Feat. SajN & Hesky - Our Future (Never Know)

Postby Spyder » Sep 7th, '13, 03:51

This was a nice collab. I think silver had nice flow and multies. Its good to see sajn writing, and hesky had some nice quotables. Nice collab.
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Re: Just Silver Feat. SajN & Hesky - Our Future (Never Know)

Postby CrashBand » Sep 7th, '13, 10:11

Hesky, as usual, bringing his charisma and wit :y:

One of the few writers on this board who doesn't have forced rhyming. (and I don't mean Relapse bending word styled forced).
I'm not tryin to be rude, but I sincerely wanna fuck the taste out of your mouth
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Re: Just Silver Feat. SajN & Hesky - Our Future (Never Know)

Postby Francesco » Sep 7th, '13, 11:13

Nice... all 3 did great! :y: Nice concept too...
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Re: Just Silver Feat. SajN & Hesky - Our Future (Never Know)

Postby SajN » Sep 7th, '13, 15:25

Thanks, people.
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Re: Just Silver Feat. SajN & Hesky - Our Future (Never Know)

Postby Halftongue Dre » Sep 9th, '13, 20:07

Awesome. I want to jump in sometime. I like the flow and style. Not my style but it works. Keep it up yo yo's..
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Re: Just Silver Feat. SajN & Hesky - Our Future (Never Know)

Postby Just Silver » Sep 10th, '13, 00:22

this reminds me i need to write thanks guys
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Re: Just Silver Feat. SajN & Hesky - Our Future (Never Know)

Postby Flamez » Sep 10th, '13, 03:10

This is a nice collab from you three I liked the flow of it keep it up.
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