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Sinister Syndicate

Postby Spyder » Oct 23rd, '13, 21:06

LOF

Just Silver
Steppin in the mic booth bullet proof Clark Kent
Weapons in my pens anyone can be a tar-get
Freeze em how tar gets just in a single breath
Villian threats blow them off as cold as my soul gets
Goin after MF the real one in comic strips
me and peter parker throwin punches and cosmic kicks
goin harder than our nemesis from '66 thats rhino bitch
But you know what time it is we demolish kids
in front of an apocalypse over the metropolis
Power to ignore the shooter hard as sex fuck Luthor
Only lex we care about coupes or beats were choosin
Lookin like the joker when we flow you seem so foolish
Got a full deck but your flush is roto rooter
Super human your new rulers fast movements
Assuming our moves thinkin were not telepathic
Could cause a drastic reaction quick as arachnids

Spyder
back on that battle bar shit lashing targets, packin large clips
like Peter Pan... cast it and start Shadow boxing the blackest darkness.
this is salt in the wound, man on the moon in an operating room
syringes and hospital tools, the shit doctor Doom wouldn't walk into.
you cross me its costly, crossbow to ya body, long nose on the shotty
get crossed off my list, put you on the cross so you know that i'm godly.
both my arms hold a charge with such voltage i get explosive sparks
you couldn't blow a dart at a beached Noah's Ark, just the phony heart of Tony Stark.
you are a hoe like Scarlett Jo, that bitch get tossed out the back window
don't you think Spyder would be the closest to fuckin the black widow?
i'm out for revenge like Venom when its settled look at the Carnage
the Silver surfed by with his writtens and bar shit, i'm spittin the hardest
just stretch your bars like fantastic stretch his arms, drastic bore
guess Johnny Storm's Thing is Invisible... and that what he Fantastic For/Four
raped like ass to face, pain, in the game I've lapped your place
records smash and break, shit not even Bane could mask the pain.
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Re: Sinister Syndicate

Postby Just Silver » Oct 23rd, '13, 21:14

damn this is nice :y:
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Re: Sinister Syndicate

Postby Slim Fiasco » Oct 24th, '13, 20:15

This is awesome, I love the comic-book references through out. Great rhyming too, good job from the both of you!
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Re: Sinister Syndicate

Postby Just Silver » Oct 24th, '13, 20:18

thanks guy we need more feed lol :/
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Re: Sinister Syndicate

Postby Just Silver » Oct 29th, '13, 21:02

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Re: Sinister Syndicate

Postby Just Silver » Nov 14th, '13, 02:51

Last bump
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Re: Sinister Syndicate

Postby sneakerheadshady » Nov 14th, '13, 12:28

just saw this, its really cool.
Silver: your rhymes are really clear here, and i like the way it flows, and how you switch up the rhyme part way thru but it doesn't seem weird
Spyder: Some really good multis, rhymes flow pretty well (in my head at least) i like the references throughout both of them, yours especially

nice job guys
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Re: Sinister Syndicate

Postby Just Silver » Nov 14th, '13, 14:12

Thanks guy
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