Rise Up

[Flamez]

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buried alive in dirt inside a coffin it’s time to rise up
keep corrupting this earth and like a volcano erupt
full of violence above the law fuck the government
sign my own death warrant your opinion is irrelevant
I know death is imminent I live life like I wanna live it
u don’t like it well I never told you to jump into my shit
get off my ship you were never invited into my life
I survive in order to live, my advice is don’t think twice
like nike just do it don’t act surprised stop pretending
Just be yourself, but now it’s time for me to start ascending
stepping up to home plate you know it’s already over
clock’s done ticking but I haven’t lost my composure
playing poker like Phil Ivey never know if I’m bluffing
crushing blows to your face you’d think I was boxing
dropping toxic bombs don’t get religious I ain’t Jesus
It’s the breath of Chuck Norris with a pen of a genius

Feedback appreciated.

[sneakerheadshady]

i really like the 'just dont give a fuck' attitude of this piece
the ryming is solid, and the topic is stuck to for the most part. nice job

[enjinn]

good verse...flow was nice with cool lines...Keep writing

[Flamez]

thanks guys haha