Fuck this was pretty ill, of course since you're very experienced. The rhyming is great and it felt natural, the flow of the whole thing was on point, easier than a lot of the pieces you'd fine on the cw section.
This is just a straight up bars type track right? It's well done lots of your lines are hard hitting, I can sort of feel your deliver already without the recording.
Anyway, I'm not as experienced as you are so that's as much as I can give you. I really like it, great read.