Love/Hate

[Eedee]

LoF: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=168504#p2542127



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y6-I4S9INmw

[Verse 1] (00:42)
It has to be love, I mean, it has to be love,
Because it has to be love, and once havin' enough
Is too much, we screwed up, there's no second chances
But then I found you, and as crazy as it sounds
Who knew that once I loved and lost
That what comes apart comes back together
And I worship the ground you walk on
We talk on and off, and we saw that we lost it,
In this crazy game of love, we seem toggle the off-switch.
And just like that, it's back on, we're back on
Back on target, close my eyes and just mack on -
You. And I have no clue what happens tomorrow
Cause today, it's you and I, yesterday it was me
And suicide never waits till you see your other half
But in fact, no matter how many tears
No matter how many years go by
I know that you're mine, you don't have it say it
I can see it in your eyes, though...

[Verse 2] (1:47)
Moving on from you, I've had some struggles to deal with
Canvas my blank face, a cover, I feel this.
I wonder what real shit I have to face today
It's time to give me space, and I'm half a plane away
From just leaving this Earth, I need you to stay up
Cause keepin' the paintbrush steady is horseshit,
A mishapen insane vein throbs on my portrait
Cause the only time I've heard my dad say he loves me
Is when I gave him the biggest disappointment
By droppin' out of college - going to Australia,
It's been hit or miss, the choices that I've given you
I'm livin' proof of my sanity, I've lost it,
I'm livin' proof you can hate your fucking offspring.
And when I saw this,
I calmed since the only reason they love me is because they listened to my album
It's interesting the outcome,
And I'll do this till I come out on top.
It's music,
I penciled this, but now what?

[Francesco]

That was good...

[LilWayneNorwayLove]

Tried reading it a few times, second vers so strong dono waht to say..
Maby just me but i was rly confused by your rhyming, and rhyming a word with it self.. but it was overshadowd by the strong lyric ! gj

[Just Silver]

Some neat shit ya got guy

Loved the toggle the off switch but these lyrics are hard to flow (didnt watch vid :/)

I enjoyed the second verse pretty thoroughly first verse had a very shaky start imo
But lyrics were vivid enough which is what I like

Good stuff broski we should collab we sorta got similar styles

Sick beat at points

[Dirrt]

I wasn't feeling the first verse but I really like the 2nd, especially this part

I wonder what real shit I have to face today
It's time to give me space, and I'm half a plane away
From just leaving this Earth, I need you to stay up
Cause keepin' the paintbrush steady is horseshit,
A mishapen insane vein throbs on my portrait
Cause the only time I've heard my dad say he loves me
Is when I gave him the biggest disappointment

The best line in this is

A mishapen insane vein throbs on my portrait

It's good