cold case

[Spyder]

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cw dead i tried, to revive, good vs evil choose a side
who is i? I'm the shooter type the one religious figures crucify.
made call outs a few dozen times, but dudes just hide
so its either suicide or dawgs get euthanized you decide.
inceptions the lesson, i enter your minds center
and find whether your irrelevant or this guys clever,
i find your rhymes under light censors like mine treasure
next step vital i pull out the eraser, apply pressure,
disguise the lines you try'n to put together
and wipe em clean, so when you go to speak it resembles mimes gestures!
you're mine friend you're, dealing with someone smoother like Clyde Drexler
so sharp my 'tongue in cheek' bars leave a slice like I'm Dexter!
your lifes ended, be on the lookout for my new tape
improved great you'll get both sides of the head like the coin of two-face.
I've been, scrutinized, hated say I'm overrated need to move with the times
yet I've been boxing em up, don't think TJ, JT, when i get em in Suit and Ties!
I've been putting noobs aside, when i came on we had a better grasp of the bars
cause i fucking trained 2sday, Ray, and Game to battle hard how tracks should start.
made 50 off whitefox for my bars... shit Silver another that I've ghosted
I'm pretty sure I'm just writing for everyone and i don't even fucking know it.
so if the games running down the drain I'm pluggin up the spiral
you struggle for survival I'm gunning for revival...
someone tell Menzo, Spyder 2.0 coming for the title!

[Just Silver]

Good shit a little hard to flow but it was packed with multis

Lol at the ghost line

We need to collab soon I can tell your style is changing a bit

[Spyder]

No one else... Fuck

[EvryOnesACrtc]

This was cool. My favorite would probably have to be the shout-outs/call outs. Also, the opener was nice--flowed smooth--but, my God, that 'suicide' 'crucify' etc. is used so much in rhyme schemes that it's not even mildly impressive anymore. Also, the lines starting from 'inceptions the lesson' fell flat to me. You set up this long scheme, building up what you're about to say, but it ended with you turning people into mimes? Idk, the line didn't seem to deliver or pack much of a punch after that long of a build up. Your ending bars were done well though. A warning/threat that made me excited to hear more. You've changed up your style, amiright? I enjoy the surplus of rhymes in bars. If I recall, you didn't do that before, but I feel like you dropped in quality of punchlines for the sake of more multis.

I still get excited when I see that you've dropped a piece, cuz I know I'll see some great quality rapids, but regarding this verse...I've seen better from you, a lot better.

[Spyder]

This was a piece in prep for my upcoming tape, all the punches are in there lol

But that mime scheme, cmon bro.

Literally get inside their head and change shit, so when they speak nothing comes out. Like how mimes do. All smooth and flowed great. I'm defending that line haha

Thanks for the feed fam

[Francesco]

Nice one Spyder...