ahem

[Young Luc]

ahem... ok its a late night
ha boys im a put up a fight
lyrics r dope
spittin cluelessly
i will even spit in yur face
if yu mess wit my bff solace
lol, got no clue what im talkin bout
bored... living just out of toronto
tryin to pick up my flow
man im dryed out like a hoe
who just squirted
young luc and yes im perverted
raps retarded
but i still start it
oh ok i got sumthin on my mind
i wanna be a good rapper and shine
tht dream will come true soon
cuz i got skillz and i like to persue
thoughts ?

[James R.]

My thoughts? Why the fuck are you posting creative writing shit in the studio section where people post beats, and talk about the production of songs. Oh and it sucked balls btw. Quit.

[Young Luc]

im not a quitter,

[James R.]

You're not a writer/rapper either...

[Young Luc]

i'll get better

[Solace]

STOP POSTING IN THE WRONG FUCKING SECTION

[yamahiney16]

fyi this is the creative writing section...and i thought it was prety good for a newbie

hence the reason forit saying creative writing at the top

[James R.]

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewforum.php?f=44

And notice, his topic "Ahem" is in the STUDIO section of the site and was moved here. FYI

[Young Luc]

fyi this is the creative writing section...and i thought it was prety good for a newbie

hence the reason forit saying creative writing at the top

thx for sayin sumthing positive man props

[Solace]

if yu mess wit my bff solace

i fucking lol'd

And yes it was moved to CW section. Just notice Luc that The Studio is a place for people to like post beats and ask for questions on mixing.

My suggestion for you to improve in rap is make each line at least 12 syllables.

[yamahiney16]

im not usually in the studio section so excuse me

luvz