Dear God II

[gutawafang]

God, give me the strength to hold back my tears
Give me the hammer to go whack my fears
Give me the acid to destroy this mask that I’m wearing
I thought you’re the kind, concerned, nice and caring?
Wouldn’t you grant me time to change history?
To erase this pain and ease this strange misery?
I need you, God, please, I’m on my knees
Lips reaching the floor now and now I kiss
Give me the vigor to fight my weaknesses
And further power for future instances
Would you release me from this cage I dwell?
Listen, are you still on the same page I tell?
God, I require you
God, I need you
God, I desire you
God, I love you

[Fa-Q]

Liked it all except the first two lines....but foreal foreal dope...I especially like the last four lines...simple but to the point...good drop

[gutawafang]

Liked it all except the first two lines....but foreal foreal dope...I especially like the last four lines...simple but to the point...good drop

thank you a lot man! oh yeah, i just realized the first two lines is bad. hahaha

thanks.

[Spyder]

dope bro

loved the emotion in this didnt force anything

[classthe_king]

This was really good, you should make it longer

[gutawafang]

dope bro

loved the emotion in this didnt force anything

Arigato.

This was really good, you should make it longer

Thanks man. Yeah, good idea.

[BabyBLue91]

Lips reaching the floor now and now I kiss
Give me the vigor to fight my weaknesses

Loved that bit, could feel your emotion.. nice drop

[GoodGirlsGetGutted]

^You speak Japanese?

"give me a hammer to go whack my fears"
That line was,,, cute.

I'm becoming even stronger in my faith lately, so I can really appreciate this.

I'm assuming this was a poem?

Actually... it reads more like a prayer.

Make a part 3, complete the epic trilogy.

[gutawafang]

Lips reaching the floor now and now I kiss
Give me the vigor to fight my weaknesses

Loved that bit, could feel your emotion.. nice drop

thank you.

^You speak Japanese?

"give me a hammer to go whack my fears"
That line was,,, cute.

I'm becoming even stronger in my faith lately, so I can really appreciate this.

I'm assuming this was a poem?

Actually... it reads more like a prayer.

Make a part 3, complete the epic trilogy.

no, i don't speak japanese. I only know how to say arigato which means thanks. and kukumalitama which means this is the end. lol.

yeah, i wrote it as a prayer actually. but as i typed out the prayer, i naturally wrote it as a rhyme.

i don't know. it can be a poem and a rap at the same time. but if it's a rap, i'd prolly need to adjust some words to make it flow right.

thanks for checking it man.

[Solace]

Oh definitely as Fa-Q said the first two lines weren't up to par. Was a good read though, liked it Cliff. Yes, I'm gunna be calling you that from now on too.

[gutawafang]

Oh definitely as Fa-Q said the first two lines weren't up to par. Was a good read though, liked it Cliff. Yes, I'm gunna be calling you that from now on too.

alright. LOL.

yeah, thanks for the feedback man.

[Just Silver]

I found through search..

Im happy a found this not as strong as the third but a worthy prequel

[gutawafang]

I found through search..

Im happy a found this not as strong as the third but a worthy prequel

thanks.